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Reviews for New Desires

By : LadyRain
  • From oralfixatn on April 14, 2007
    Damn, this story is hot. HOT. Smokin' HOT!

    But it's not just hot, either. I can feel their connection, their complete trust in each other, so that makes it very loving as well as hot. Do you know what I mean? Not once did I feel that anyone was being cruel or that anyone was a victim or being humiliated. Which is not always easy to do, either. Some writers go a bit over-the-top to try to make a story seem really nasty of deviant, but I don't get any of that cringe-worthy stuff when I read your story and the way you've written it. I appreciate that more than you could know, seriously. Your style and technique in writing this story is actually very beautiful. It's written in such a minimalistic manner that anything else would be overkill, over-doing it, and because you keep it simple it makes it that much more. Really graceful, if that makes any sense. Anyway, I love it...you know, in case you didn't pick up on that.

    :?

    I hope there is more to come. Thank you for what you've written so far.
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  • From ANON - Sandra on January 11, 2007
    Very nice: sweet and hot.
    Good work.
    Sandra*
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  • From ANON - Cameron on January 10, 2007
    Few points:
    - Buffy (Sarah Michelle Gellar) has hazel/green eyes.
    - Error: "think shirt" (line 13).
    - Error: "I bet you wish that was me and your right now, huh?" (line 20)

    Other than those; great - each chapter is short & sweet.
    (Feel free to delete this post after corrections :)
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