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Reviews for Forward to Time Past

By : UnbridledBrunette
  • From ANON - ra on January 08, 2007
    Oh, I am enjoying this story. I just want to pet William, he's so cute. And I feel awful for him, since I suspect Buffy may have no choice but to break his heart, or the timeline will go all to hell. (If you can get around that, that'd be ok with me. *g*) Thank you.
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  • From ANON - strangecandy on January 08, 2007
    I really do like this story. I love William's character and the detail that you put into their lives in that specific time...However (no offense or anything) the story is moving so slow to me! It doesn't even seem as if Buffy even likes William yet. And I have an odd feeling that William isn't even Spike because there is nothing that shows their is a connection between them except they have the same face. I think you should work on putting some movement into the chapters. If you are writing a story that is long (like 50 chapters or something) I kind of understand that your trying to develop the setting and the situation that the story is about. But if the story is just a short fic (20 chapters or so) then something should be happening. Start with putting some chemistry between Buffy and William. Wiliam's adorable but Buffy is so... hard. She's so blunt and kind of mean to William, it makes it hard to like her. By the way, this is just a little constructive critisism that you asked for. I'm not trying to insult your work or tell you that you're a sucky writer or anything, cauuse you're not! I actually enjoy your style of writing and I love William's character as well, so don't change him! Keep on writing and update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Becky on January 07, 2007
    I'm rather enjoying this greatly. :) I can not wait for you to conitinue.
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  • From ANON - wendy on January 07, 2007
    Hi,

    I just started reading your story and really love it. I can't wait to read more.

    Wendy

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  • From ANON - *rei* on January 05, 2007
    im lovin it! very different way of a buffy going to the past fic! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Naomi on January 05, 2007
    I take back what I said yesterday.
    I love you =)
    You update so much, and so frequently, that I can hardly contaian by excitment for chapter 8, etc.
    Well done =)
    Naomi-
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  • From ANON - Naomi on January 04, 2007
    I violently dislike you.
    You can't just leave it there!
    I've heard of 'on the edge of my seat' But I'm on the bloody floor!
    Please update soon. It is a truly wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - Vette on January 04, 2007
    So enjoying reading this story, look forward to more chapters.
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  • From ANON - crazy on January 04, 2007
    well that has to make for some crazyness. can you just imagine her face?
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  • From ANON - Mac 1 on January 04, 2007
    I started reading this at your former(?) website, and caught up the last few chapters at vampkiss. I adore this story! It's really one of my very favorite times past travel stories and I was so disappointed when it stopped so long ago. I'm thrilled that you are currently updating it and also posting it to other archives so more people can read it. It truly is a wonderful tale, and I recommend it highly.
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