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Reviews for Forward to Time Past

By : UnbridledBrunette
  • From ANON - Lindsay on January 10, 2007
    This is an excellent story, I just read all ten chapters and I want to read more! Will there be an update soon?
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  • From ANON - Crash on January 10, 2007
    Awww this is really good!! I like the fact that Buffy's partially Victorian and partially current-ish american-like..lol
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  • From ANON - crazy on January 09, 2007
    aww what a sweet chapter. I love how they are acting towards each other.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on January 09, 2007
    I am LOVING this story!!! It's beautiful and very well written.
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  • From ANON - Nat on January 09, 2007
    Just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story. I love the way you have fleshed out William's character. Can't wait for more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Sandi on January 09, 2007
    Please don't stop writing this story. I actually just discovered it and started reading it this week, and I love it! The concept of Buffy having to learn about the human Spike, the man who came before the vampire, is engrossing, and you are writing it wonderfully. I'd love to give constructive criticism...just can't think of anything!
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  • From ANON - spuffyluver on January 09, 2007
    Awwwww he is so sad, bad Buffy, bad!!! I really love that you update so quickly but my heart goes out to William, he's so obviously taken with Buffy and she is being a bitch!! HAve her make it up to him!! Please? I love this...
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  • From ANON - crazy on January 08, 2007
    great update, I like how we get to see spike while he was still human and watching buffy try to fit in this time period is always fun. I look forward to reading more.

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  • From ANON - leah on January 08, 2007
    it's really nice so far. i like how it's going. although, you can tell that it's going to take awhile before anything actually happens between them, just because william is incredibly shy. i'd say speed it up a bit but it might wreck the story a bit, so im not sure. anyways, good job so far.
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  • From ANON - Inara on January 08, 2007
    Keep up the great work and post often... I can't wait to see what happens... I think that bracelet is going to be very important when Buffy comes back to the future... I just get this feeling...anyway please can we have some more!!!
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  • From ANON - Sandy on January 08, 2007
    I'm enjoying your story. I especially like how you insert bits of historical facts and info into your story.
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  • From ANON - Amy on January 08, 2007
    What a charming, wonderful story! Deinately not the typical buffy goes back to the past sort of story. I can tell you've reall put a lot of work into researching the Victorian era. I can't wait for more chapters!
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  • From ANON - Unbridled Brunette on January 08, 2007
    I want to address a couple of questions/comments made by some reviewers.

    Strangcandy, I see where you're coming from about the story moving slowly but this is going to be a very long (novel length) tale so I have time to get the characters where I need them to be. Also, I wanted to be very realistic in the development of Buffy and William's relationship. In the canon of my story Spike has not redeemed himself through Glory (the story picks up after 'Forever' so he didn't have the opportunity.) Therefore the last interaction Buffy had with Spike was in 'Crush' when he tied her up in the crypt and tried to force her to tell him she loved him. Naturally, I think it would be harder for her to trust and like William because of this. She will soon realize that she can't blame the human for the vampire's mistakes, but it won't happen overnight. However, please don't feel like I will get angry with you if you have some constructive criticism for me; I won't. I appreciate your honesty and thank you for the review. :)

    Chloe, I would love to answer your question about Spike but unfortunately I can't without giving some pieces of the story away. So I guess you'll just have to wait a bit. Which means keep reading and reviewing! ;)

    Boadicea, please don't take my comment as a threat that I will stop writing the story. I love this story--I couldn't let it go if I tried. But I'm posting it to several other sites as well and if I don't feel it is getting some kind of reader interest here I would rather just not waste the time posting. I didn't mean to sound like one of those whiny writers demanding hundreds of reviews. :P

    Thanks to each of you three and to everyone else who reviewed as well. I appreciate all the feedback. :)
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  • From ANON - Boadicea on January 08, 2007
    Please keep writing this. Just because tons of reviews don't show up doesn't mean there aren't people who are reading it. Nothing is more frustrating than a story that just ends because the author decides no one likes it due to few reviews. Do YOU like it? Then it's worth writing.

    Besides, it's nice to read a story where the author actually knows the rules of grammar and can spell. :)

    You're handling the human William very well - you've managed to make him Victorian without making him hideously chauvinistic. You've also managed to avoid making Anne maniuplative or deceitfully domineering while allowing her to love her son. Very well done!

    Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Chlo on January 08, 2007
    You know something? I love this story. There are so many undertones, and you have given yourself so much potential with what to do next.

    Can I just ask. Did Spike recognise Buffy when he first came to Sunnydale???
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