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Reviews for Forward to Time Past

By : UnbridledBrunette
  • From BloodyLove on July 14, 2010
    This is so cute and so sweet. I love it. I hope you update soon I'd really like to know what's going to happen. If Spikes still going to become a vamp or not?
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  • From spikeskitten on July 17, 2007
    I completely luv this story. Please finish it. I'm anxiously awaiting what happens next. It's completely fasinating. I'm looking forward to reading more as it comes.
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  • From demontainted on June 21, 2007
    Oh my god, I loved every. Single. Bloody. Chapter.

    The characterization is spot on, the people come alive in your mind, I find myself reading almost entire chapters out loud, smiling like a poof at how cute William is and how Buffy is so helplessly drawn to it.

    You capture the time period so well in your writing, the descriptions are elegant and a delight to devour. It's like I myself have been tossed back into time, being forced into the same kind of restrictions as Buffy while I verbally rail at my computer about the pointless social protocols. I can recall clearly at one point shouting: "Fuck it! Buffy, hang the rules and punch the bitch in the face- dear god please!"

    As is bloody obvious, I'm in love with the damn story you've so artfully created. So much so that I took the time to create an account on adultff.net just to post this review, because I really wanted you to know my honest thoughts on it.

    I do hope new updates are coming soon- I'm unclear if the story is over or not, with the way you ended the fourteenth chapter with that clever poem... it is open-ended enough to be recognized as an ending.(I sincerely hope it is not however, I wants me some more delicious fiction) I also hope you have not lost all will or desire to continue with this brilliant piece of work(Which can be the case when authors do not receive enough reviews or appreciation for their hard work spent in writing.)

    But if that last bit is the case, it's understandable- extremely saddening, but understandable. So if it is, please drop a reply, or perhaps alter your profile to give some kind of commentary on it?

    Lovin your talent for the written word~

    DT
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2007
    ooh, ooh, more, more... uh... please?
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  • From Spuffy on March 16, 2007
    Love the story please update sooon!
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  • From KarinM on February 28, 2007
    This is such a nice story! I hope you will continue it.
    I mean this could be complete, but i like the storyline and how you write it. I hope you write more, and i hope you do it soon!!
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  • From elerrinarose on February 08, 2007
    Yay! I want a stuffed William doll to hug! With his little glasses and his little brown forelock falling into his eyes... How adorable would that be?
    As to your story, Brava! There are not nearly enough charachter driven stories in this fandom. And the few you encounter tend to be not nearly strong enough in it's portrayal of personalities or dialogue.
    Also, I thank you for frequent updates and long chapters. Since I have become addicted to this tale, to find a new chapter (or 2) every week or so is just plain exciting. It's like tuning in every Wednesday night to see what Bones and Booth have been up to! Addictive and lovely.
    More William, more Buffy, more Anne... sil vous plait, just MORE! Make this story as long as you want, I will read every chapter :)
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  • From firefreezes on February 07, 2007
    oh, oh oh my! i just found this story today and couldn't stop reading until i'd reached the most recent chapter. it's so lovely!

    and i hate that i have to wait to find out what happens...i'm afraid that william still runs into drusilla...
    i await your next update with baited breath!
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  • From Glorificus06 on January 29, 2007
    To say I love your story is an understatment. I absolutely adore it, a rarity I assure you. Though I like much of the fanfiction I read, I'm rather picky about leaving reviews. Lol, I fear I'm becoming more fond of William stories then Spike ones, for some reason or another the William ones I've read seem to be written better & more character & plot driven. I do beg of you that you update as soon as possible, I'm not big with patience when it comes to stories, I hate being left wondering, not knowing whats going to happen next. So cliffhangers are killers for me, lol. I can't wait to read more of "Forward to Time Past"!! Please email me when you intend to update it.
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  • From Purerockerchick on January 19, 2007
    I love this. This is the first BVS fic I have ever read. And I love it. Amazing job.
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  • From shadowslayers01 on January 15, 2007
    love it, just found more at vk. cannot get enough.
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  • From ANON - nicki on January 14, 2007
    Ok, all I have to say is: more, more, more!!!!
    I just started reading it and I already can't get enough of it. It's a great story. And I love they way the Victorians are characterised, their time and rules and the way Buffy handels it.
    Just love it!
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  • From ANON - Serenity on January 12, 2007
    I just read all 10 chapters tonight and love your story! Very creative and well written. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - ddf on January 11, 2007
    Gack! This is a lovely piece of fiction. It's got everything I like, mixed in a new and fresh way: Buffy in an AU setting that isn't really AU at all, cute William (gah! I just want to give him a hug.), modern concerns in a Victorian setting... You're characters are wonderfully multi-dimensional; kudos for not simply relying on people knowing the show to know the characters. You've given them a depth that is both complimentary to canon and tailored to suit this work in particular. I am very interested to see how you treat William's becoming a vampire, especially in his relationship to his mother. Really, I just can't say enough good things about it. I know that many readers don't review, but know that you have at least one reader who is utterly transfixed!

    P.S. I love your historical details, like Boxing Day. Not enough to feel like a history lesson, just enough to show Buffy's adjustment and give the work a feel of accuracy. :)
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  • From ANON - hannah on January 11, 2007
    Absolutly beautiful, i love the story and you have written the language so well! More soon please!

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