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Reviews for The Lord and the Lady

By : Gillypod
  • From ANON - ChrissieLinnit on December 19, 2006
    Hmmm... I wonder just who is the greater Mistress of Intrigue? The Lady *coughspitcough* Drusilla, or Buffy? Dru and Angelus might want to fleece William for everything he has, but Buffy has allies in her quest to protect not just her dowry, but her family AND her integrity. I actually feel more sorry for William than I do angry. He might be good looking and totally shaggable (although he's not enough for Dru, apparently...) but his brains aren't above the waistline are they? I don't know how he's managed to retain Clem as a friend.

    Please, please, please, please don't let Buffy be so weak that she drops her drawers for William as soon as he makes any serious play for her. Let her have greater willpower, and determination, than that. And, just a small plea... I do hope Xander isn't just a whelp. He was a courageous lad on the show, and totally brave, if not foolhardy sometimes. He deserves one lucky punch!

    Great chapters (27,28,29), pet. (there were a few typo's in these though... just thought I'd mention)
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  • From ANON - crazy on December 19, 2006
    oh man, that is just spelling trouble, with a Capital T
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  • From ANON - orchid on December 19, 2006
    I just read this story in one sitting and its unbelievably breathtaking and engaging. I love how you've described the characters and their motives. I really can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lynda on December 17, 2006
    I love the way you hooked me into your erotic tale and from it emerged a story. I simply adore it. I just started to read on this site and therefore I just discovered your story. You are very talented and I will be sure to read anything you write. I am not very good with words myself but it does not that I cannot see your gift as a writer. The reason your story is so interesting is the actual plot and the way you make me feel after each chapter. This last chapter was touching and sad. I do believe that Buffy is so wonderful in this story. Spike is also a victim in this story but lets face it, he is a little naive himself. Which is quiet believable for this era. I will be waiting impatiently for the updates and I promise to always let you know how wonderful you are doing.
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  • From ANON - Mollie on December 17, 2006
    Yea!! Go Buffy !! I just love how she put him in his place and left him speechless! Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Purple Moose on December 17, 2006
    I loved that "Your lips are no longer needed or required." hahaha!
    make him pay!
    but then make him crawl back to Buffy (where of course she will refuse him) when Drusilla chews him up and spits him out!
    ahahahaha!
    Yes!
    I love your work dearie!
    Update soon!
    Purple Moose
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  • From ANON - wild child on December 17, 2006
    hey, just read all 26 chapters and let me tell you i love it. the way the plot has evolved and how you put details in. I am a history teacher however i have not studied this time period in depth. and with the school system i never seem to get away from american history. So this fic feeds both passions. history and buffy or spuffy as the case is. thank you.
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  • From ANON - crazy on December 17, 2006
    well, i do have to say that I enjoyed that quite a bit. I just love it when i log on and there is a update. and clem standing up to William was such a great idea and of course clem yelling at William over Dru and William still defending he was having me wantt to beat him up. I love that you do not portray william as a "shy" man and give him more of a "spike" feel.
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  • From ANON - Mary on December 16, 2006
    Great story so far!
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  • From ANON - ChrissieLinnit on December 16, 2006
    I know there's a high smut content to this story, but smut alone is not enough to draw me in. I like plot, action and character development.

    This story has the makings of a very clever psychological intrigue. How cunning and manipulative can Drusilla be to keep her pet sex-slave and potential revenue stream? How desperate does William/Spike have to be before he starts making stupid decisions and acting upon them? How good a friend to William - and ultimately Buffy - is Clem that he will keep putting himself out to help the foolish and the forlorn? How strong is Buffy that she can rise above her obvious attraction to Spike and take control of their impending marriage and retain control of her own finances, or will she end up at Spike's... and Drusilla's... mercy, struggling to retain a shred of dignity in the face of Spike's continued betrayal of their betrothal with Drusilla and her menagerie of degenerates? How will poor Xander react? What of Joyce's ill health? So much at stake. Makes you wonder... just how much is an exciting sex life really worth, eh?

    Loved the new updates, pet.
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  • From ANON - Mac 1 on December 16, 2006
    I've read the first four chapters and am very impressed. I love a good historical story, but most of them are either too short or written very poorly. My main gripe with them is that the characters tend to be clearly twenty-first century in attitude and speech, and that historical accuracy is glaringly missing. Zippers in the eighteenth century, that sort of thing. Anyway, you really put a lot of attention to language and speech patterns that more realistically reflect the period of the story (and whether they are perfect is not a problem for me, it's the atmosphere you set by the language you use and put in their mouths that is important and you do that exceptionally well. I also like the plot itself. You're doing a fantastic job with this and I look forward to reading more of it as you post it. And I sincerely hope you will continue to write in this fandom. Good writers are always welcome and sought out. Thanks for sharing your story with us. :-)
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  • From ANON - Cynthia on December 16, 2006
    I really love this story. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens after they are married (which I'm sure they will be) and I thank you for updating so frequently. Oh, and I love Clem!
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  • From ANON - crazy on December 16, 2006
    wow, yep she is pissed, and wow 2 chapters between the time i went to sleep and woke up. sooo happy. clem is such a good friend, *ducking to avoid getting hit* i could shee him and buffy getting together to straithen out spike
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  • From ANON - Mollie on December 15, 2006
    OMG !! Poor Buffy! I dont know how she can go through with her plan, now. I hope she walks out on him and makes him regret his games! Great update! You have me on the edge of my seat waiting for more!!
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  • From ANON - Dana on December 15, 2006
    Oh No!!! How could he do that!!! PLEASE update soon!
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