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Reviews for Suzerain's Companion

By : JLH
  • From HavocTellenoi on March 02, 2008
    I don't think I've read a single one of your works, that hasn't moved me to tears. And this one definitely did. The imagery, the storyline, hell the whole damned thing was absolutely delightful. It was a beautiful and moving piece and while my legs went numb and my dogs whined for attention, I didn't even move until I finished it, from chapter one to the end. Three hours later, and one roll of tissue, I'm finished and astonished at how really, really beautiful this particular story was and yet, "Elderly Pets" is still my all time favorite, though this one now runs it a close second.

    In plain english though, awesome story and may you pen many more for the rest of us to read and enjoy. ^_^
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  • From asydnes on February 16, 2007
    I just wanted to tell you, Josie, how much I have truly enjoyed this futuristic spander fic. The emotions, the intrigue, the action, all of it has been glorious. Kudos!

    *Mwah*
    Dae
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  • From Olwen on January 21, 2007
    Lovely story. I really enjoy the fresh setting.
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  • From ANON - LittleMouse on January 12, 2007
    aw....
    *weeps*
    so sweet! i love this chapter!
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  • From ANON - Casey D Hayes on January 07, 2007
    totally cool. hope there is more and that if there is that you update very very soon. love the ideal of Xander as Spikes Pet, totally love this story.
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  • From ANON - Christine on January 01, 2007
    Awwww! Poor Xander!

    But, I'm soo glad that Spike found him....now begins the painful process of healing. Spike is going to have to be extra supportive for Xander, I'm sure he is going to feel useless with his eye missing.

    Loved protective Spike :)

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Bradon on December 30, 2006
    Nice one. But I find myself hurting with this story. The change in Spike, the loss of everything. It touches me and saddens me. But thank you for this.
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  • From ANON - Christine on December 21, 2006
    Uh oh!

    They took Xander????? That is sooo not cool! Spike is gonna be uber pissed.

    I hope that Xander does not die and that they can get him back real soon.

    One good thing about the newest turn in the story, we get to see Spike in action! And, if they get Xander back we'll get to see Spike in protective mode!

    Loved it, can't wait for more. One little request....I'd love if the chapters were longer!
    Lots more please!
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  • From ANON - Angie on December 20, 2006
    OH man, I've been following this story for a while now and I have to tell you that this cliffy is going to drive me nuts! I love this story so so much and I want to beg you now to please update ASAP because this is like torture.
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  • From ANON - AddictedtoBuffy on November 25, 2006
    Yeah. Thanks for updating. Poor Lisbeth, there lives will forever be complicated, won't they. I absolutely love this story but have one small criticism. These last few chapters have been much the same as later stories in the five rings series in that you become so focused on this happening, then this and this that the other part of story telling is ignored, the how it effects the characters you do have some of but this can be enhanced by conversations. I hope you aren't offended by this criticism, it is not my intention. I just know how constructive criticism can be helpful to my own work and so I like to offer it to other writers as well
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  • From ANON - purrfus on November 20, 2006
    ch 15. just finished. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - purrfus on November 20, 2006
    ch 10 - Thanks for having your live journal address on screen. For some reason I cannot access the posting for chapters 9 th 13.

    Just finished chapter 10 on lj. Stunning. The set up was laid, so I knew there would be violence, but to have him just finish the meeting. Intense.
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  • From ANON - purrfus on November 20, 2006
    ch 8 - WoW! Nicely done and oh so restrained from overly preachy visual of how the world ended with amazing background details and explanations without having long drawn out lectures, or boring multipage blocks of text. Great mixture - you might want to consider offering classes.


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  • From ANON - AddictedtoBuffy on November 19, 2006
    Well this last chap is food for thought. I like how the demons are more humane than the humans and how you have turned what is almost slavery into a good thing. Its definitely original and your world seems to be created effortlessly and quite informative at the same time. Please keep going
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  • From ANON - AddictedtoBuffy on November 11, 2006
    Interesting Chapter, I like the veiwpoint that humans are better off with the demons ruling them and it is a timely reminder of how destructive to the environment humans are. Keep it up
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