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Reviews for Oedipus Calling

By : addielogan
  • From ANON - Graz'zt on December 15, 2006
    The story continues well. Thanks for clearing up that it's Angelus you're writing about here. As soon as I saw that, it made perfect sense. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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  • From ANON - crazy on December 14, 2006
    i love this fic. and hell yeah this is NOT a fic about Angel, they are worlds apart. have a good relaxing holiday. I do love the chartization that you have yet again mastered.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on December 14, 2006
    cant wait too see what happens next.. and now that liam knows..ohh boy...lol...well have a merry x-mas and a sweet new years.
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  • From ANON - Shay on December 13, 2006
    I will be here anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I hope there won't be any reprecussions from their night together. I wonder if William will become Spike now and be the 'man' Liam....well, wants him to be, is not right, but....

    Amazing story and I cyber kiss your feet for not making me suffer through any B/A sex. I look forward to more.

    Peace and Blessings
    Shay
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  • From ANON - Amanda on December 10, 2006
    WOW angelus finally hit buffy and now she slept with spike, cant wait to see what happens ....keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Naomi on December 07, 2006
    Oh dear, Buffy's fallen asleep. In William's room. ON William. This can never end well.
    Love the fic so far Addie!
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  • From ANON - Roz on December 07, 2006
    I'm glad your muse seems to be back. I feel badly for William. I really do.
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  • From ANON - Genna on December 06, 2006
    I think the story is interesting.

    I didn't know where you were going when you first started telling the battered Spike, strong Buffy son/stepmom story. It feels like you are stuck between going too far where incest is a central storyline and exploring Buffy as moral champion. If Buffy put herself in a position where William ground himself against her to the point of ejaculation, then I haven't figured out how you can stop the story there.

    Also with Angel/Liam being a prick in this story, I don't see how this is going to work out in Buffy and William's favor. Your story has Liam as the overcontrolling, domineering mysogenistic husband who grinds women under his feet. You haven't cut yourself any slack away from the 3 central characters you've written.

    Perhaps you can explore what Buffy was missing when she met Liam. She thought he suited her needs and saved her from a Cindarella tale but now she realizes she needs something more because William gives it to her. How does she figure it out?

    What is that William thinks Buffy brings to his botched childhood? Will he figure it out before Liam pops? Does Darla want to have anything else to do with her son William? Does college looming after the summer break mean that he plans to sex Buffy and go on about his educational business?

    Will Liam leave Buffy for the next blond bombshell?

    Each storyline tightens into a fresh take on what you have already developed here.

    Hope this helps (chapter 8 asks 4 our review input).

    Genna
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  • From ANON - Naomi on November 30, 2006
    I'm so sorry if this comes out wrong :
    Bloody buggerin' hell! How can Buffy be so n?ive!
    'Sunburn?' Even I wouldn't fall for that.
    There. Thats my rant over. But I do understand that Buffy needs to been seen as the loyal wife. I'm glad William has finally admitted he wants Buffy. But I really wanted to jump in the screen and kick Liam where it hurts. It's people like that, that don't deserve to be fathers! I like were this is headed. You are a very talented writer Addie. I'm just glad you let that show through in your Fics. Well done. I look forward to the next update. And hope you're job treats your brain better soon. -Naomi
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  • From ANON - silent pluto on November 25, 2006
    whoop! This is the first buffy fanfic I've ever read, seriously.
    and I think this one takes the cake. Wow!
    Buffy, and Will are so cute! Damn his daddy!! lol
    I hope you come back and update, because this story is getting
    really juicy! hehe

    kudos!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on November 19, 2006
    VERY GOOD DRAMA! and another good chapter as well.....have a good thanks-giving!!!
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  • From ANON - Graz'zt on November 18, 2006
    I'm really liking this story, so I thought I'd let you know. And that's even with the fact that I really like Angel. But your protrayal of him as a villinous character essentially makes him a different character than the one I love (if that makes any sense), so it doesn't bother me. Anyway, you are a topnotch writer, and the story is a lot of fun. Thanks for all the hard work you put into your writing!
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  • From ANON - karin on November 17, 2006
    It is ones again a really good story. Ik can't wait to read more. I like how you made angel and spike father and son. I still hope that buffy will end up leaving angel, but hey that'sjust me. i like spike en buffy together.
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  • From ANON - wildwomen on November 16, 2006
    great chapter, have a good thanksgiving.
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  • From ANON - Naomi on November 16, 2006
    Thanks ever so Addie!
    I've been looking forward to this post since the last one!
    Stupid ground rules.
    I woulda jumped William's bones soon as he got in the house!
    But I understand there's gotta be a plot.
    I like that both of them are sexually frustrated. Not just the teenager.
    Yay hormones =D
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