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By : AddictedtoBuffy

From jujukitty on September 16, 2011
just found this last night, really good story, a few spelling issues and awkward phrases here and there but the plot was great, the interactions between all the characters was wonderful and the sex was hot. great job on this :)
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From ANON - Jess on October 07, 2009
?Sorry Spikey but the heart told me that I could be a real princess where everyone would give me exactly what I wanted and we could have tea parties and guts everyday. Then the baa baa black sheep didn?t have wool but gave me these lovely guards to make the nasty girls bleed and then the predator of the forest and mountains, the wolf, said that all I needed to do was to stop you and the nasty Angel beast by making a hat trick out of the rough Scottish Island"
Sorry Spike but wolfram and heart told her that she could be a real princess where she gets what she wants and all she has to do is get rid of angel and spike and they gave her guards to accomplish that. am i right
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From HavocTellenoi on February 27, 2008
I loved this story. It's great. You do Spangder(didn't know what else to call the Spike/Angel/Xnader combo) so very well...this was an amazing story. Then again all your stuff is wonderful. Keep up the good work.
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From asydnes on February 13, 2008
I'm not sure how I missed this before, but I managed to read it in one night! Excellent job, dearie!! Loved it! :D

*Mwah*
Dae
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From sablerose2 on June 24, 2007
Just read this story loved it been reading it all day lol pulled me in and wouldn't let go. Thank you again great story.
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From KagetsuAsame on March 15, 2007
I love it, wonderful to read and although I'm not that big into fisting I love that whole last chapter, so sweet to each other.
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From pixel2817 on February 20, 2007
Well i'm sad to see it end, but what a yummy way to go out. Very hot smut and your three boys reconnecting with eachother. This was a great ride and i'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next
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From ANON - Sir Magus on February 19, 2007
awesome ending! i love it! this is definitely one of my favorite stories if not the top favorite. i look forward to reading more from you so let me know k?
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From bubbysbub on February 19, 2007
ok, i feel like, mega guilty that i missed a chapter!!! real life sucks!! i can't believe it, i never miss a chapter!!! you know you are in for it now- an ultra long review!!! that's right, i must cleanse my conscience with worshipful mutterings and mindless raving. well, hopefully not totally mindless. but you know me!!!
first, though, the serious stuff. *strikes dramatic pose* i am hereby volunteering my services, if noone else has volunteered, as a beta. i have more than passing knowledge of the necessaties- spelling, grammer, and plus i like to tell people what i think of their writing (audience gasps in amazement here- bubbysbub likes to make her opinion known? we never would have guessed!!!) and i promise i am not that pushy, honest!!! just click on my name and email me at the address listed. however, i am not online for the following fortnight as we are moving house and the internet people need up to two weeks to set up the exchange in our area for ADSL. hopefully it will only be a week though. after that, i am all yours if you want me *leers suggestively*. plus i am only a part time worker so i have a fair bit of spare time, despite my three year old ( i must be blessed to have a child that prefers to play on his own). so mail me darling!!!
now that that is taken care of, we may proceed!!!! i am reviewing both chapters cause i can't believe i have been too busy to check for updates!! (stupid packing all my stupid four years of collected crap) i have reviewed every chapter since i found this story. i can't believe i missed a chapter. i feel guilty because you are providing me with literature for my enjoyement. i remain loyal to stories and make sure you know they are appreciated cause that's, i don't know, polite?? to miss a chapter, i am rude rude rude. so stop ranting bub, and review the damn chapters (that little voice in my head is taking over my typing).
loved loved loved it even though it was the end of the story (sobs hysterically) but that's ok cause you so left it open for a sequal (one based on lornes predictions of xan's singing would be awesumness!?)if you wanna, and of course, there is the pending oz and andrew promised fic. i have really attempted to think of a name for that one, but i suck at names, my files for my stories are like 'the one about blah blah blah'. and i don't post my fics when they get finished because, well, none of them are finished, hehe. one day. i was already considering volunteering as a beta either here or at the silver snitch (gotta luv harry fics) cause i thought that might encourage my own writing as well. it always has before when i have casually helped friends out with their writing. but no, i have about five fics i am working on, and so far, no end in sight for any of them.
i will say that i loved chapter 41- i know i have already reviewed it, but i loved the action in that one. not normally an action kind of gal, but that was perfect. just right amount of urgency and angsty and poor spike staked dru and was excellent. and the end of the chapter, leaving them in the alley, one unconcious, one drained, and one emotionally and physically shocked was the perfect lead into chapter 42. i loved angels remorse for spike having to off his own sire, and the bit where xander thought he was a vampire and asked angel to stake him was quite poignant. beautiful little titbit of angst. i really liked that xander felt compelled to touch angel for reassurance, that was really sweet. sad though, that he feels guilty that spike had to stake dru for him to live. spike would never allow his dark princess to drain xan though, no matter how much he loved her. i suppose at this point, where all the shit that's been hovering over them has finally gone down, and very unexpectedly, emotions would be running high and everything feeling a little out of focus, of course they are going to feel remorse and guilt and sadness that they really don't deserve to feel, none of this crap was their fault after all. as for chapter 43, the ending (oh no, not that!!) was beautiful. when spike woke up and was sad, and xander just hugged him and he and angel were just there for him, that was fabulous. the fact that the boys can just be there for one another is real, if you know what i mean. i loved the fact that it was angel and xander giving support to spike this time, it made the relationship feel more equal, like the dynamics of the three don't have to rely on xander being the submissive needy partner. it would have made him feel a bit more secure in the relationship too, i suppose, because it would reassure him that he was not the only needy one of the bunch and that he can be strong for his partners too. as for spikes first line of the chapter, "..show me that this is where i belong.." that was a little heartbreaking, cause that really made me feel like he felt that, partially because of the guilt from slaying his sire, that he needed to know that he had made the right choice between dru and xan, like he needed to know that he hadn't destroyed his only chance at love. he needed the reassurance that despite dru being gone, he still had love. that was sad for me (angsty yummy) and that led to...
SMUT!!!!!!!!!!! even if its angsty smut, its still smut!!!! i can't believe you finished this story with smut!!! you love me, you really love me!!(you need a jim carey voice for that). sexy threesome in the shower was HOT! was so fucking good (pun intended). and then they move to the bedroom and oh my, have i ever told you that i find fisting scenes extemely titillating!? to put it mildly. oh my oh my ooohhh, that was goooood!!!! i love that he has never let anyone else do that with him before. i am not calling xan a slut, but he has been with a few partners before and done alot already, so this is something that is especially for them, you know? by the way, the little comment about angel could be angelus with all the laughing that he has been doing? that was good, cause it showed that despite all the shit, he has been happy as a member of the triad. xan and spike have brought him happiness. i like that. just another confirmation i guess.
as for the ending, that was perfect. i know you said before that you don't want a happy perfect, the world is butterflies and rainbows ending, so that was just right. the boys together, happy, satiated, current shit resolved and most issues dealt with but not over and forgotten cause they never will be (xanders addictions, spikes loss of dru to name a few) but still living and that means emergency after emergency in the angel/buffy verse, no matter how AU it is!! but still a happy contented feel to the end, cause i gotta feel satisfied, even if life goes on, if you know what i mean. end result, you did really good, you rock the sisterhood!!! (by the way, dear author, are you of the male or female persuasion? i realised, i have no idea! me girl, if you no realise. pen names are a little difficult, leaves way to much room for offence-of which i mean none.)
anyway, that's my review for the last two chapters. was great and now i feel a little down cause its over *sniffle*. looking back, it was a great fic, a long haul, 43 chapter, wow!! did you ever expect it to got that long? was way worth it. i think i will have to go back and read it again once i am back online and i have unpacked all my accumulated crap at our new house. was a satisfying fic, with all the elements i love. mystery (who the hell the mystery girl could be was what suckered me in at the start), the action, the angst and the mushy and love, and of course the hot steamy smut. you know that i adored the POV style of writing and i enjoyed knowing what all the different characters were thinking. and my favorite three boys when it comes to some hot lovin' (though at the moment i am addicted to gibbs/dinozzo ncis pairing- squicky at first, but then, delicious).
was a fabulous fic, thankyou from the bottom of my heart for wonderful relaxation time every three days (energiser bunny through and through), you are a trooper and i love you. if you decide to utilise my beta-ing talents, i shall talk to you soon, if not, post something soon so i can regale you with more long long reviews and rambles to amuse and iritate you with.
thanks again chicken
bubbysbub
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From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on February 18, 2007
I didn't read the entire story but what I did read was great. The images you wrote about jumped off the page letting me see everything that you where writing about. You really cared for or hated the characters in your story. The relationship between Angel/Spike/Xander was written beautifully. In the end you couldn't help feel soory for them and the love and comfort they gave too each other after Drusilla got dusted was beautiful and so emotional. You did leave this story open for a sequel. And you where right the relationship between Angelus/Xander has been written about a lot. Though one story I haven't seen a lot is where Angelus cares really cares about Angelus and no one really understands this except for Spuke and Xander in the end. This might be a story you should consider exploring. Keep writing you did a great job with this story.
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From ANON - Sir Magus on February 17, 2007
awesome ending, though im sad to see the story end. you have come far since the first chapter and this story has become one of my favorites. let me know if you start another story k? i would enjoy reading more from you.
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From pixel2817 on February 14, 2007
Still feeling so sorry for Spike, he's in such a bad way. But maybe focusing on fixing Spike will help Xander avoid thinking about his addictions. Nice to see Angel worried about his Childe, and i'm looking forward to them being happier soon
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From bubbysbub on February 10, 2007
yep, definetely an energiser bunny. me, i take forever to write anything, i start stories and leave them and come back to them months later- its why i don't post, i can't do that to the readers!!! but you churn out great reading material in no time!!! love love love it. this chapter was good, no, great!!! the final showdown with dru. she one crazy mutter. or was!! was really cool. i am so pumped now, they smacked the bitch down!!!! very emotional too. spike couldn't let his dark princess hurt xan and so he staked her, but now he is getting all upset and crap. after xan was all 'gotta tackle the mad bitch to defend my consorts'....was so cool and i really really want another chapter. please insert your black and silver double A's and get too it!!! lol, love your work darling, this story just has everything!!!! smut, angst, smut, action, smut, a bit of mystery, and did i mention the smut? was happy that willow didn't do anything to my xan, and that she was fine with oz finding someone (so looking forward to that sequal- did you ever find a name for it?). loved that little scene prior to our boys getting their heinies whipped. the vampy lovers were wanting to celebrate their first night together as special- that was so sweet that they were worried about him and his addictions- with good reason, but still, they did say that if he couldn't beat this then they would be through, so i don't think they want him to sink back into that, they don't wanna lose him. its sweet, ya know? i feel content now that i have had my fix of this story. thanks again honoured writer, for a fantastic chapter, please don't make me wait too long to find out if the boys are ok!!!
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From ANON - Vampiric Whore_x on February 10, 2007
Heya it's me again! =P
Loves it!
Sooooo good!
Need more horny scenes though =P
But awesomeness!
x
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From ANON - Vampiric Whore __x on February 08, 2007
Heya =]
I thought i would tell you how amazing your fanfic is!
I need to catch up on the last few chapters, but i'm sure they will be just as good!
You are a fantastic writer, i have ended up crying in this, laughing and obviously coming (Too much info?)
Ah well!
Just thought i would say it's great!
Keep writing, i'm hooked!
x
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