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Reviews for Temptation

By : Virtualpersonal
  • From ANON - Obsidian on July 09, 2008
    Ok I have been reading these all lately. A friend of mine told me it would keep me from being too bored at work. And I have to say so far your story Temptation has been the best one. You really should look into writing sci-fi fantasy novels like Laurell does. I honestly think you would come up with some cool plots and lots of the fun stuff us bored people enjoy reading. Really wish you would continue with the story. But if not two thumbs up from me.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on October 30, 2006
    Really enjoyed your story. It would be great to see a sequel.
    Maybe something with Buffy, oh and what about Angel finding out
    about the two, add a prophesy, apocolypse or
    something like and what fun there could be.
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  • From ANON - Spikeluver on October 20, 2006
    I love this story. You are a wonderful writer I love the Dominate Dawn! And your Spike is perfect!Great story hope you post more
    Deanna
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  • From Virtualpersonal on October 16, 2006
    No, that's not the final chapter. I was just thanking everyone for the comments to date ::grins:: We are drawing to a close though. I think one more chapter will do it. *Hugs*

    Cas
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  • From ANON - isolde on October 15, 2006
    yay! loving chap! alrite, i can accept the story is coming to a close...BUT THAT WASNT IT RIGHT?!! WATS W/ THE PAST-TENSE A.N!? update asap plz, i dont even kno if the watchers find em there. do they stake spike? do they face the watcher(and eventually buffy) head on? do they run? answers for a few of the questions plz. *hearts 4 spawn*
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  • From ANON - Elerrina Rose on October 10, 2006
    ... *shiver* ... hold on a sec... *pours a glass of wine*... *gulps it down*... WOW!
    Well, she has been claimed! Gotta love jealous, posessive, slightly insecure Spike. He's adorable and agressive and... oh, just YUM!
    And now they have an audience... you know Spike loves that :)
    *sigh* Maybe THIS year Santa will bring me a vampire of my very own.

    Keep it coming. I require more! (I have a doctor's note stating I must have a steady dtream of vampire smut. Asher and Lestat can only take me so far.)

    I'm loving it!
    ~ Ellie Rose
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  • From ANON - isolde on October 05, 2006
    geez, didnt c that comin. here wen i think u've converted t sensitive human spike, BAM! the badass vamp we all wanna bang. he cant still b the old vamp after being born...3 times is it.? lookin foward t this new(..old?) spike. gah, well i dont c an end in sight yet,im glad im still likin it too much 4 it t end. hate 4 it t end wen y got so many possible happenings. keep doin a wonderful job ppl, viva la spawn!
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  • From ANON - gypsy on October 05, 2006
    woot! very steamy ppl. uneventful day, decide t' read a lil, and looky wat i find. had meh readin 4 the better part of the afternoon. i missed vamp-spike, glad he's bak....hope he can keep that bloodlust in check. keep it goin guys, i'd b upset if the 1st fic i've read ina while was abandoned by its authors.(too good of a story ppl,no givin up!!) >;}
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  • From ANON - Elerrina Rose on October 02, 2006
    Hooray!
    There's only one thing I love more than newly human Spike... Old School VAMPIRE SPIKE!!!
    Oooh, but now's he's free and he's had a taste of the liquid penny. Suspense! :)
    Will Spike be satisfied with just a few drops? If he's not, will Dawn wake up in time to stop him? Will Buffy have to battle Spike one last time? Dun dun DUUUUNNNN!
    Tune in next time for the stunning continuation of... TEMPTATION!

    Love it, bring me more :)

    ~ Ellie Rose
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  • From ANON - Elerrina Rose on September 21, 2006
    .... *shocked silence*.... wow.

    Yay! Finally! So hot... the yum of Spike knows no bounds.
    BTW, LOVING the leather cuffs ;)

    Thank you very much!
    ~ Ellie Rose
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  • From ANON - isolde on September 21, 2006
    ur doing amazingly well! this is the quickest update ever, i luv u 4 it. i was praying towards the end that they didnt stop *applause* THEY DID IT, ALL THE WAY DID IT!! YAY! looking foward t the last chap(s). ^_____^v
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  • From ANON - isolde on September 19, 2006
    so happy they finally made a decision, great chap. theyre fucking...but they're not, geez always sumthing. that course of action seems less and less logical each chapter. still enjoyed it, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Elerrina Rose on September 18, 2006
    Alley dry fucks... *sigh* we're getting closer!!! Yay!
    During the dance when Spike found Dawn and the 2nd boy, I thought he was going to "break both his fucking hands" and he thought he would in earlier chapters :) Good stuff! Slaying makes you hungry and horny and I love that Dawn carries on the tradition.
    More, please!

    ~ Ellie Rose
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  • From ANON - April on September 01, 2006
    i love Spike/Dawn sotrys this is the second I've read. I am new here. Your story is great I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Elerrina Rose on August 22, 2006
    oooohhhhh, SO CLOSE! Grrrrrr...
    I amend my last statement: Dawn IS my hero! She's awesome!
    Ever since season 5, I've always had a little crush on William. There's just something about socially awkward, nerdy englishmen with glasses that gets me :) Same reason I love Wesley. Reading Spike as a re-humaned professor is simply delicious.
    I LOVE IT! I love it... More, sil vous plait, MORE!

    ~Ellie Rose
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