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Reviews for Dawnie's Little Kink

By : jb2907
  • From ANON - zediir on May 25, 2006
    are you going to update your fic now that it's finally on the new site?
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on February 07, 2006
    I just read the entire story this evening and all I can say is WOW! That was really hot. You have a couple mistakes here and there, but nothing big. Hope you can update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kink (Was kinky) on February 04, 2006
    Ok, cool. I might use a couple of things, and turn them around a bit. Thanx.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2006
    When are we going to see ch.8? I can't wait!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kinky on January 28, 2006
    OMG! I can't wait till next chapter! I think I might have to do something now. ;)

    (p.s. I was thinking about making my own Dawn/Willow and/or Tara/Spike fic kinda like this. Is that ok?)
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  • From ANON - GG on January 27, 2006
    absolUTley LOVE the storyy~~ i knd of wish it was a little bit different everytime dawn touches ..it seems like shes doing the same routine again and again over all GREAT
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
    Wow!! Didn't you leave the door open for major kinkiness[and the opportunity for some delicious dirty talk].Here's a suggestion: now might be a good time to recount how Tara got initiated.She could tel Dawn that her first was one of her high school teachers. She began tutoring Tara at her house and they became close and things happened. That'a how Tara became so kinky. She could tell Dawn the things they did from oral sex to fisting to anal to toilet games[no.1 AND no.2]. This should get Dawn all worked up.Just some thoughts. Great stuff, keep it coming!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - tim on January 27, 2006
    the girls are teaching Dawn lots of new things.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
    Glad you took my suggestion about things getting "out of hand " with those two.Watersports,huh? Tara being into enemas is one way this could go. Just try to include more "ass play" later. It's the perv in me.Great job!!!!!
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  • From ANON - CPT Skip on January 26, 2006
    Oy! I did not see THAT coming. Tara is also a kinky girl! Lol! Not that thrilled with idea of the water sports thing, but you pushed one of my buttons with Dawn in stockings. Ohhhh! The mental image of Dawn running around the house in just stockings and high heels... More, please? I am loving this sexy and yet strangely innocent story of yours.
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  • From ANON - Wally on January 26, 2006
    Great story. Very hot and erotic. You also have a good concept of the characters and their reactions and rationalizations. Keep up the good work, and am looking forward to the next Chapter
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 26, 2006
    I think you should add Buffy into the mix. I bet the girls can seduce the slayer if she happened to catch them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2006
    Glad to see more of this piece. If you wanted to prolong the story, you could have things get "out of hand " between Dawn and Tara after their talk. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - CPT Skip on January 23, 2006
    Lol! I love everyones' rationalizations. I always thought that Tara had hidden levels of kinkiness. I'm glad she is going to get involved with the fun. I can't wait for more of this delightful kinkiness.
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  • From ANON - Mike A. on January 23, 2006
    I can't wait!!! I hope the next chapter is a very, very long one... and now I can only think in puns, so I'll stop...

    I do think that Tara's reaction was a lot more... "violent" than I would have expected. I would have expected her to hear Willow out a bit more, and then it seems she went from "against" to "for" a bit too quickly. If she had started out less "against", the "for" would have been more in keeping.

    Please write more soon...
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