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Reviews for The Right Thing

By : jl1980
  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 18, 2006
    Well, I still believe Riley deserved that death (I would have extended myself a little more, however...).
    Buffy is still confused about the whole thing. I still believe your fic is getting more and more interesting each day. Can't wait until tomorrow.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 18, 2006
    Good chapter. Buffy is still VERY confused about what to do with Spike. I would be, too. After all, he's a vampire, we all now it, but Riley... Well, I think everyone deserves a second chance, except rapist and torturers, I'm sorry, but Riley knew what he did, and his consecuences. He was a monster, much worse than vampires, who, after all, and with a few wxception (Angelus, Dru, a pair more), kill only to eat.

    Until next chapter, hopefully, tomorrow.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 16, 2006
    Well, Spike has a *lot* of explaining to do.
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  • From ANON - Su on January 15, 2006
    Wow cant wait for Spike to kick arse. Bad bad writer for leaving it there. More I need more.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 15, 2006
    I think that, after that night, even Spike, who had been for more than a century with the psycopath of Angelus and the more-than-insane Drusilla, will be traumatized for life. Not for his beating, no, only for what he had been forced to live. And I don't think I blame him for whatever torture he decides to use against Riley. Or the soldiers. They deserve to die slowly, painfullly, in so much pain they can not even scream.

    Oh, and for a moment I though general Cordova was going to interrumpt Buffy and Spike, catching the slayer in a fact that is not obviously a beating. Although it seems to me that the general would like also, to do *something* to Spike if she were sure he was not going to fight against her, with chip included and all.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 14, 2006
    Oh, yeah, they've fallen in lust. I can't say love, but lust...

    Hoping for your next update, which I think it'll be tomorrow.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 14, 2006
    So, Buffy has decided that she and Spike will compete on who is the one who makes hornier the other, isn't it?

    Interesting, interesting...
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 12, 2006
    So, Buffy finally confesses Riley?s actions. Interesting. Poor Spike, receiving beating after beating. But he could steal the information, very clever, very *lucky*.

    Waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 12, 2006
    Spike is evil, evil, evil... I can imagine (and drool about) a half-naked vampire with a cocky grim and extremely tight jeans...
    No doubt why general Cordiva hasn't killed him yet... Watching him in those pants should be enough reward... *Venus is drooling at her mental images of Spike*

    Until tomorrow, when, hopefully, you update yet another chapter of this addictive fic
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 10, 2006
    Hey! It's me! (and you'll think: That girl... AGAIN???? Does she have not anything else interesting to do?? The answer is yes, but your fic is more interesting, so cope with it)
    When Xander said that "so this is abour saving Spike??" I thought Buffy would die of embarassment.
    And then again, Spike has really a way with people, he had shown it a lot in the series. Just a mere touch, a look, a half-smile, and he discovers secrets nobody knows. He discovered Tara and Willow's relationship only for a small touch of hands. And he is extremely perceptive, but he shows these abilities when he wants, or when it is on his interests.

    Waiting for your new chapter. Hopefully, tomorrow.
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  • From ANON - rachel on January 10, 2006
    two more great chapters, hopefully soon they can find a way to help. and the last thing buffy said about breaking up with riley, loved it. thank you for updating quickly i look foward to more.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 10, 2006
    It was time the slayer met her "double". Each time I feel more and more sorry for the poor vampiress.
    And Buffy finally saw what is really happening, and that Spike thinks more important his childe's safety than his own safety. Oh, and the tender moment in front of the salyer. I thought he was going to act all harsh and hard, like nothing, but he showed compassion, and care, and being a vampire, in a place like this, it is a weakness, and he knows.

    Good chapter. Hope you don't mind that almost all rewiews are mine.

    VenusOfHeaven
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 08, 2006
    I understand poor Darian. I would freak out too. He must be incredibly traumatized for his experience. Oh, and I can't stand rape. So Buffy better kick Riley's ass more than hard.
    I have in mind some tortures for him. Nothing can be compared to the horror of being raped. But being raped, beaten, and tortured in a daily basis, I can't just imagine the extent of the pain Diana must endure.
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  • From ANON - rachel on January 08, 2006
    oh my god what a horrible place! at least buffy finally know. please update soon i cant wait to see the place burn!!
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 07, 2006
    Ph, I believe Buffy id going to have nightmares tonight after hearing what she heard. And I loved the play woth the words "Cordova" and "whoredova"
    Did you know that, in Spain (where I'm from), in difference from South America, "C?rdoba" is written like that?.
    Well, not interesting, but I just ad to say it. ^_^
    Spike shows a maturity of behaviour that we only saw in the series a few times, and I must tell that those moments were among my favourites.
    Really good work, people in character, and you developed the story well, in a correct tempo.

    Good work, hoping you keep with this rate of updates...
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