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Reviews for A Witch In LA

By : Kinetickid
  • From yessire on February 24, 2008
    you made me cry! god i so love the tara/faith combo. you do such great work, thank you.
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  • From lycanthrope on February 26, 2007
    okay so brilliant story, and i want to applaud you on mentioning sister hazel... they rock and noone i know has ever heard of them so yay for that...
    the ending... omg okay so ima sap, i cried... i knew you couldnt leave her dead, no way... so was kinda expecting it but i dont give a shit cuz it was good lol
    anyway thank you for hours and hours of fun
    love and kisses
    sarah xx
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  • From ANON - blackie on January 23, 2006
    :)

    thanks for sharing this beautiful written work.
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  • From ANON - Shadows of Faith on December 30, 2005
    Good Ending I am very impressed
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  • From ANON - Nicole on December 29, 2005
    Ok completely disregard Anon's review. This was a great story from begining to end. And while your method of bringing Tara back was different then what I thought you were going to do, *I thought you were going to do like they did on the show with spike and just bring her back* It was still good. I love that no matter what Tara's soul found her way back to Faith. And when you think about it that way it makes sense since you made sure it was known about their connection and the fact that they were soulmates. Good job. Do another? Not a sequel, but the same pairing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2005
    Overall good story little disappointed in ending. What made this story so good was the slayer/witch dynamic. Without that it's just another b/f story. And don't understand the need to change the character's appearance. A new name new face but same person....will be to difficult to connect with.
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  • From ANON - Arasashi on December 26, 2005
    omg so very very good! i was worried that tara was just gonna stay dead for a while there lol. oooohhh are you gonna write a sequel?
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  • From TheRavenEmerald on December 25, 2005
    Bravo, Applause, Encore--wait, actually, no, I'll just reread it. But well done, this is possibly one of the best stories I've read on here. If there is any possibility, a sequel would be mucho appreciated. Great job. Nice touch with the Slayer addition.
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  • From ANON - amanda on December 25, 2005
    lovely ending!
    sequel...maybe...yes, please?
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  • From ANON - Jinx on December 23, 2005
    It would be so erotic to bring Tara back as a ghost (like Spike) and Faith not be able to touch her. Reading about the sexy slayer getting frustrated because she can see her witch but not touch her. Have Tara do a striptease for Faith and Faith masturbates for Tara while she watches her strip.
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  • From ANON - Sunshine on December 22, 2005
    What difference does it make what tense the story is written in as long as the story line works and flows well. If I was spending 25.00 on the latest Harry Potter book I might pay more attention to tense but since fanfiction is free I'm just looking for an entertaining story to read. Loved the story think your a good writer look forward to your next fiction.
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  • From TheRavenEmerald on December 21, 2005
    I really love your story, I'm just wondering, are you going to make Tara come back like Spike did on Angel?
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  • From ANON - Nicole on December 18, 2005
    Hmm, Great update! I can't wait to see how you end it. But no matter what...DO A SEQUEL!!
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  • From ANON - tked on December 16, 2005
    How in the HELL did I miss this story??? WOW! I am absolutely blown away by this fic. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kit on December 16, 2005
    While I think the plot line is very interesting, the writing itself leaves a lot to be desired. The author switches tenses and tries to use the present tense mostly, which generally fails (past tense is usually preferred). Despite this problem, though, the story is well done - the characters are mostly true to the series (within reason, obviously this is an AU story), and the story itself is touching, containing both good plot and sex scenes I'm sure we all wish we could have seen.
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