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Reviews for Broken Revenge

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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 02, 2005
    I had a feeling that he had been forced to rape the gal, but I didn't think about the breeding part. So now we have a plot to the story. Time to go save Xander's baby. This should be fun.
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  • From ANON - RemityGirl on November 01, 2005
    WOW! I'm a mess!! I'm upset, I'm relieved, I'm happy..and sad... and horrified!! WELL DONE!!

    I'm so glad that you decided to contiune on with Xander's healing. This story is one of my all time favorites. Which is bad, I guess, because this story is so horrible for Xander... but it haunts me. Silly me, I cought confused with the name changes and didn't even know this was more of my favorite story unitl very late last night!! GAWD!! Im SOOO glad tat I found it. I left feedback after reading the first part begging for more.. and YOU ROCK!! cuz, here it is!! THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 30, 2005
    Dear gods, but Xander is truely screwed up. Not that I didn't already know that, but this new development is quite the twist. Xander would be a psychologist's dream/nightmare patient. Another wonderful chapter as always. Please hurry with the next chapter. I'm going to have to check every few hours to see if you've updated. I really have no life.
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  • From ANON - rngrdead on October 30, 2005
    Ohh.... thank you ... on a whole lot of levels but also ... the poor love!

    You are able with a minimum of innuendo and a maximum of brilliant emotional description, give us just some small insight into what the dear man has been through... And yet are also able to give the feeling that Spike knows... Utterly and completely he knows.

    It seems his actions are calculated to allow Xander the 'break out' but even he would be the first to admit it is an 'unknown quantity when it happens.

    I am utterly captured by this story and you made my day with your update... many many thanks...

    J
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  • From ANON - catsim on October 30, 2005
    Oh, my...God! What a powerful chapter. Xander has broken, broken training, broken rules, broken his life before slavery....broken! What is Spike going to do to solve this? Any order is just going to throw Xander further in to his broken state!

    Wonderful chapter, but please, continue it soon. I can hardly wait!

    Love ya


    Cathy
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  • From ANON - Christine on October 30, 2005
    Okay, so I just finished reading all three chapters of this story. I've read the first story and it's nice to see a continuation of it, even if it is very intense. I think that Willow is soooo annoying so far. Can she not see that Xander is totally different from who he used to be? You don't go through something like that and simply revert back to who you once were. She needs to get over her denial!
    As for the last chapter, they made Xander rape someone? What? It sounds like this is eating him from the inside. I'm glad that he disobeyed Spike instead of staying still with the coins on him. He needs to work through this memory and deal with it. I just hope that Spike is smart enough to realise that punishment should be the last thing that needs to be done here when Xander is obviously falling apart. Poor Xander!
    Loved it and can't wait for lots more. Post more now!!!
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  • From ANON - E on October 28, 2005
    Can't rightly tell you just how happy I am to see this particular story continued. I honestly think that "Beutiful Broken" is one of the best BtVS stories that I've ever read.... Which is saying quite a bit when one considers just how many fics I've managed to read since first finding out what fanfiction was:) Looking forward to hearing what Spike will do next since he clearly wasn't happy with Xander at the end of this last chapter.....
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  • From ANON - uncouthkitten on October 28, 2005
    Totally great. So good to see that the sequel cometh. Will continue to follow, avidly waiting for updates.
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  • From ANON - catsim on October 26, 2005
    Oh, no, what's wrong with Spike. What has Xander done wrong, in Spike's eyes? Oh, please, don't take too long to update this most wonderful fic. Hanging off the edge of the chair, here, and let me tell you, that ain't the most comfortable place to be *g*.

    Love ya

    Cathy
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  • From ANON - rngrdead on October 26, 2005
    Oh oh.... but he did *so* well... Poor Xan... I know why Spike was angry... just like any protective parent ... you end up yelling when the little one is finally found after endangering themselves... but *please* make it better... He is doing *so* well... Please... (even my naughty muse is worried!)

    L
    J
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 26, 2005
    Another great chapter as usual. Xander's in trouble with Spike, can't wait for the kiss and make up part of the party.
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  • From ANON - Shinoga on October 25, 2005
    Dude I just finished rereading Broken for the 3rd time then I check this site and boom sequel!!!! I like so far and I've been wondering how slave Xander will survive in droopy Xander's world. Willow comparing her treatment as a slave to Xander's is an interesting twist, mostly because that is such a real reaction and so often fanfiction ignores reality. It's a nice change. Well then I'll leave you and hope your muse inspires you to even greater works.
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 25, 2005
    Great!!!!!!! I loved Broken and this looks like it will be even better. I can't wait for the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - CammyKat on October 24, 2005
    OMG Your writing the 2nd one ...I LOVED the first one, think I've read it soo many times!! GAHH yay! *dances*
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  • From ANON - nightengale1824 on October 24, 2005
    I have so been looking forward to this. It is wonderful so far. I love the way you portray Xander . When will Willow and Giles get a clue??? I love all of it so far. More real soon please.......nightengale1824
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