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Reviews for Broken Revenge

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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 14, 2005
    I have been waiting all weekend for this story to be updated. All Weekend! You hear me? You nearly drove me over the edge with anticipation. Not a very nice thing to do to the kitty.

    Ok, that said, another great chapter as always. Glad to see Xander is getting better and his ego is actually reinstating itself. But now Angel knows that they're up to something, why do I have the feeling he's going to try and 'help.'
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  • From ANON - R on November 11, 2005
    Wow, the search begins was hot.

    The rest of it was very nice, too, especially your portrayal of Xander's emotions when meeting Cordelia and Wesley. It's so realistic.

    And Spike is excellent, I love him here!
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  • From ANON - dragon on November 11, 2005
    words do not exsprese how happy i am to see u writting again...I LUV U & WANNA HAVE UR BABIES!!!!
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  • From ANON - satikat on November 10, 2005
    So, I get to the end of chapter 6 and I'm all "yay! xander asked a question!" and all proud of him. YOur story has completely sucked me in. I was so happy to see the sequel begun on lj.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 09, 2005
    I've been checking almost hourly for this update. How pathetic is that? Another great chapter. I can't wait tell this weekend for the next one.

    *pssst* there's a couple typos in this chapter. sorry.
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  • From ANON - catsim on November 09, 2005
    Oh my, this just keeps getting better. How do you do it? Have Xander almost normal, then throw him into a panic attack, and then out again. Thanks, of course, to Spike, and his seemingly bottomless knowledge of how to handle Xander and his slave memories and training. Cordelia was just wonderful, just so her, not thinking about what could happen if she touched Xander, but just doing it. Lovely.

    Waiting eagerly for more.

    Love ya

    Cathy
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  • From ANON - Tisienne on November 09, 2005
    So thrilled to see a new part of this!

    Still all depressed for poor Xan, but entirely pleased that Spike is giving him what he needs and NOT trying to make him be his 'old self' again.

    Loved Cordy here, hated Wes. He didn't have to be such a jerk. Then again, I guess he just doesn't know how to deal with this version of Xander, huh?

    Dying to know what Spike and Angel were talking about, but I'm guessing we'll be clued to that eventually. LOL

    Wonderful job on this; thanks so much for posting it today!

    ~Tis
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  • From ANON - rngrdead on November 09, 2005
    Bounces... More more more!!!!

    Love this chap... Cordy was a real bonus

    Thanks so much for sharing!

    L
    J
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  • From ANON - E on November 07, 2005
    Oh my, this is getting good! Please see to that you update this quickly. I'm feeling kinda desperate for more:)
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 07, 2005
    God, I hope they're not going to tell Giles or Angel. Those two are nothing but trouble sometimes. At any rate, great chapter, very hot.
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  • From ANON - fairypoet on November 07, 2005
    Yaa! Im so glad you are wrting a sequal!! You are my fav Spander author...actually, its your fault i LUVE the pairing. &le sigh&

    Keep em coming!!
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  • From ANON - R on November 05, 2005
    Very harrowing chapter. I love how you create Xander's emotions - they're so raw and believable. I like Xander's dialouge with Spike, too, it's very believable, particularly Spike's references to Dru and poetry and roses.
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  • From ANON - TheCharmer on November 03, 2005
    Now, this is an interesting turn of events. I think I can see where you are taking this story and I am intrigued! Are they going to look for the girl? Keep it coming, keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - catsim on November 02, 2005
    Oh...my..God! Just how powerful is this story going to get? Poor, poor Xander. And the woman he was forced to breed with.....oh, I feel so much for her.

    Now then, was this Spike's way of getting Xander to let go his anger, I wonder? If so, and I think I'm right, well done, well done indeed.

    Now then, on with finding this poor woman and rescuing her! To the batmobile!

    Loving this, and you, for writing such powerful words.

    Cathy
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  • From ANON - RemityGirl on November 02, 2005
    OH POOR BABY, XANDER!! Horrible things have been done TO him.. yet he blames himself. Hope Spike can help him to see the truth.... and learn to be himself again... as more than just a slave.

    Thank you soo much for continuing on in this 'verse. 'Broken' has haunted me for a long time. I glad that we get to be a part of Xander's healing!!
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