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Reviews for HARDSHIPS

By : passionflower
  • From Mamacita on June 08, 2008
    gosh...you might have something good here but it's hard to tell as it's very difficult to read. if you would add paragraph breaks it would be easier on the reader's eye. also, i suggest you use your spell-checker and/or get a beta to look over your story before you post it.

    kudos to you for getting out there and writing--if you make it a little more reader-friendly, i foresee good reviews in your future!
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  • From ANON - Lo on October 14, 2005
    Too many mechanical errors, and the people are, um... just a BIT OOC.
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  • From ANON - spikestheman on October 13, 2005
    OK, so tell me do you know JOJO, again with the jumbled story that really hurts to read....get yourself a proper beta...
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  • From ANON - Cyberwulf on October 13, 2005
    I'm sorry, I can't get past the idea of Buffy not being able to lay Angel out with a couple of well-timed punches. Or is she not the Slayer in this "story"?
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