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Reviews for Trying to Remember

By : HayleyJay
  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2005
    great chapter! i loved it!
    cant believe buffy made the first move!
    i think itd be good to see things from buffys POV,and see what she thinks of that!
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  • From ANON - mel on October 11, 2005
    this looks like the beginnings of really great story. Please keep going. Good stuff so far*_*
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  • From ANON - I shall see thee anon on October 10, 2005
    I reiterate my previous statement.
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  • From ANON - ashley on October 10, 2005
    i really like this, can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Poet on October 10, 2005
    hey look another chapter! This was good love the dream and your description of it, perfect language use and excellent pacing. Looking forward to more! Soon... very very soon!
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  • From ANON - Shane on October 10, 2005
    I love this! its fantastic. The way you discribed Faith's dream, and how it revealed the images of the night before was great. a tad blury but still revealing all the important stuff... i could really see it happening. I can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From ANON - cristina on October 10, 2005
    Great update. I love the angst you got building up, lol. Anyway can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2005
    ohh this was good. Poor buffy and poor faith. I can't wait to read more. I hope you write more soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2005
    love it!
    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - I shall see thee anon on October 10, 2005
    Dude... you've so gotta continue this
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  • From ANON - Poet on October 09, 2005
    Hey there. Good first chapter. I'm excited about this story, looks like there is finally somethign worth reading around here!! you know, stories with plot...character development and such... and not a magical dick? ;-)

    ANYWAY I'm loving this setup you have, its shuch a relateable situation. Who among us hasnt woken up on that dreaded morning after and been like "what the hell did i do?!" HA! adn if you havent had that happen to you I suppose you just aint living. lol! And that makes the whole thing kind of funny too! which is great. You also have the voices of the characters down great. Which not many people can do. Your Buffy reactions were wonderfuly spot on and your Faith is exactally how i picture her.

    I'm looking forward to a lot of angst, and conflict, and humor and sex from you, (uh the story that is) just so ya know girl!

    nice start, now show me what you REALLY got! it rocks, update asap!
    -poet
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  • From ANON - cristina on October 09, 2005
    you better continue this! lol. I like it and you are off to a great start!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Crow on October 09, 2005
    Yo this is one great story you got here. Keep updating!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 09, 2005
    Excellent, you have both characters' voices down perfectly. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Deb on October 09, 2005
    good start you have here. very interesting situation of having Faith beign the one who doesnt remember. I really want to see where you take this, has a lot of potential for angst and frustration (which i happen to like!) as long as there is some hotness and happy endings thrown in there too! Can't wait, please continue! :o)
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