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Reviews for Touched (Part 1 of 8) Completed

By : Virtualpersonal
  • From brownbetty27 on August 31, 2007
    I loooooved this story! It is refreshing to read something on this site that isn't crap.
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  • From ANON - UniGirl on June 17, 2006
    I LOVED this story Cas! It was so funny and so hot and so romantic - This story gets 10/10 from me!
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  • From ANON - Denimm on June 16, 2006
    I really liked it..very hot and the teasing was killin me :P
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  • From ANON - kizuna on June 14, 2006
    I was laughing so hard I woke my husbend up and had to exsplain the story to him. I so loved it. kizuna
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  • From ANON - Mineko on January 02, 2006
    OMG!! You have created one of best fic i've ever read. I love your idea to BITS! every. single. letter! Wah..:chokes on tears: and it's not finished! T.T It's so great that if it's never to be finished, i'll probably die unsatisfied, and it will remain FOREVER of this little life til it ends. and beyond that too. I cant stress enough how much i LOVE it! ok my gushing is over
    The repitition of the cowboy thing was nice and original
    Spike's characterization was excelling and wonderful
    There was no willow, eh well
    the whole fake teacher thing was wonderful, since before it happened i was thinking, 'oh it'll be cool if xander get's locked up in some mental institution, and the fic gets a little angst' and it came somewhat true~ not what i was expecting, but was wonderful none the less. ~.^ approving greatly

    So, here's a little wishing on my part: more conflict~ please? i mean, since in stories like this, there can never be enough conflict and angst and and more and more and more and MORE! interaction and undeniable tension between spike and xander! whew, i'm getting greedy aren't i. But but, *.* its soooooo good! makes me squeal and laugh and and bla, i'll stop rambling. guh, it mite be the time i'm reviewing but i'm awfully giddy right now. My admiration of this and your writing is genuine no fear!

    please, never stop writing, you have so much more to increase for this story.

    anyway, i'll go check out the other stuf you have.
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  • From ANON - Christine on November 29, 2005
    This story is great! I really loved the last two chapters. I felt so bad for Xander when the Scoobies handed him over to those three goons that showed up at Giles place. I knew something was fishy with them. And then Spike being impatient, that's just classic Spike, Lol. The updates are great and I can't wait for more but I could do with much more anger from Xander towards Spike. That whole issue just doesn't seem resolved yet and Spike did promise to stay with Xander.
    Anyways, great updates. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - windandsummer on November 22, 2005
    no omg what please update please fix it ack
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  • From Tigerlily7prb on November 21, 2005
    This is certainly an entertainin' one...but it ended so sad. Poor Spike...he's lost his boyfriend. Can't wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - attirb on November 21, 2005
    I am really tempted to kick Giles ass!
    Big time!
    And than smack and kick the three warlocks!
    What the hell are they thinking "it is our way, blabla"
    but it isn't Xanders he wasn't part of their society till now.
    It is an absolut shock for him
    and it is normal that he reacts this way they should have known that
    and not take it against him.
    Oh, I could strangle Giles.
    Stupied watcher ass!
    Instead of talking first with Xander, looking how he is, making sure he is well, reasure him and explaining it
    he breaks his trust and betrays him like that.
    For all his goodwill the way to hell is plastered with good intentions.
    He destroys more than he safes with his hasty and not well thought out plan.
    Kick him!
    Grrrr!
    Poor Xander!
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  • From Sheli on November 20, 2005
    Oh my, there were some hilarious bits in there. but then at the end Spike didn't get to go with him. so I take it Spike is what grounds him then? I hope it doesn't take them too long to find that out. (blatantly hinting that I hope you update soon). you tell a great story, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Windandsummer on November 12, 2005
    oh my this was way to good, i loved the tail. Thanks for having Spike respond to Xander i dont think i could take much more of Xander getting rejected. please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Havoc tellenoi on November 10, 2005
    Absolutely bueatiful! more is most definitely need in this tale! the humor is great adn the angst is a litte additcve and makes this a bloody wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - Squick on October 25, 2005
    That's sooo sweet! I gotta say, I love me some smut but can't pass up well written fluff either. And, honey, you got both going on. *applauds* keep up the good work! And Giles getting snarky? *snicker*
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  • From ANON - jen on October 24, 2005
    Glad you updated it. this is the funniest story I^ve read in a while
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  • From ANON - Christine on October 23, 2005
    Okay, either Spike is completely daft or he is living in serious denial....like HELLO! How obvious can it be that Xander likes him and he goes out and sleeps with some chick...yeah, nice way of keeping Xander calm. Stupid vampire.
    On the other hand, it was cute how Spike was trying his best to calm Xander down. I felt so bad for him when he yelled out that he didn't want to be a freak. I'm sure once he learns how to control everything that things will get a bit better.
    Hopefully Spike develops some feelings for Xander...they are so cute together!
    Lots and lots more please!
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