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Reviews for Time After Time Series

By : Virtualpersonal
  • From ANON - Read a lot on October 28, 2005
    I just like to mention that i normaly was reading this Story an fanfiction.net but there is the ending of chapter 4 b (5) missing. I am very happy that the ending is here, but it would be good for other readers to update the ending on fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - Read a lot on October 28, 2005
    More please, much more ! This were beautiful chapters and i like to read more. Thanks for writing
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  • From ANON - CC on October 25, 2005
    Jost read the series so far and enjoyed it quite a bit. You are a good writer and I am looking forward to more. You have also written the other ages/realities very well. Two critiques though: 1) It drives me crazy in stories like this when authors try to givr the characters the same name all the time - it really doesn't seem realistic and is unneccessary, we will recognize them, and 2) there were no people 'millions of years ago' and especially with language that sophisticated. Other than that, as I said looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Christine on October 24, 2005
    Dude! I totally loved the latest update! It was soo perfect. It had the right blend of everything that I was looking for to finish that story. Hehe,totally awesome.
    And you're going to make me wait until December or January for more? Are you crazy? I want lots more now! I want to see if Xander and Spike will get together in the present story line! Please post some more sometime soon....not months later!!
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  • From ANON - Selene on October 22, 2005
    nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries* need more!!!!
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  • From ANON - vicki on October 22, 2005
    People have recently told me that I should not give feedback if its mean, because it makes the authors sad. But I say if a writer demands feedback then they can't get mad if I tell them that their writing sucks or they have no plot. But I won't have those problems with this fic. Why? Cause its fucking fabulous! Your collection of stories are well written, they draw the reader in and you have just enough Smut to keep the slasher in me happy and enough story line to make it more than just PWP (porn w/ plot), cause sometimes a girl needs more. Some of your chapters are angsty, some funny, one even has a BDSM theme which is my secret vice. You've made what could have been a bunch of good ficlets into a great story. I especially love the last one. The authors you are working with consistently write good fic and only make you shine. I'm seeing a fic awards in your future. Keep up the good work. Can't wait til the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Blue Phoenix on October 22, 2005
    Why that lying little bastard, Spike playing Xander like that is just plain mean.lolI know Xander needs to come around but does Spike need to do it queit like that? I truly truly love this story, you have come up with an original storyline an dyou make it work so perfectly keep up the amazing work~Beth
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  • From ANON - Shay on October 19, 2005
    OMG! I just left a comment on FF.net for more of this story and I come here and find another chapter. I love this series and I'm SOOO glad to see another chapter. More soon pwease.

    Shay
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  • From ANON - Shinoga on October 17, 2005
    MMM yummy fic. Glad to see this Xander isn't giving in without a fight. I need part B and I need it bad.
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  • From ANON - Christine on October 16, 2005
    Hey, I really like this series cause I love Xander and Spike together. This edition of the series is really interesting. What kind of powers does Xander have? I know you said that he's psychic but he hasn't been able to use them yet. I liked this update but one thing I don't like is how forceful Spike is being with Xander. I feel sorry for Xander because people are just forcing situations on him and not explaining anything at all to him. And it seems as if Spike is just using him for sex. So far, I liked the other stories better, there was much more feeling between the two of them. But I really want to see the next part to see what happens next. Maybe someone will finally listen to Xander and what he wants. Or just explain things to him so that he isn't being pushed around so much and having people laugh at him. I also want to see what happens with him having powers and if that comes into play at all.
    Update right now please!
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  • From Krysta on October 16, 2005
    MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!
    Okay, now that i have that out of my system, I am so loving this story. I love all the flash backs and Xander's fight with his emerging feelings for Spike. Definitely need more of this and soon. Please, if only for me.
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  • From ANON - Blue Phoenix on October 16, 2005
    Yay you updated. *does a happy dance* I loved this chapter there was so much fun and the thing about different dimensions was so cool. Kill Andrew please he is a total insult to Star Trek no one should use its power for evil, or terrorizing someone. lol. I love how Xander is finally starting to admit the stories are real. I have fallen in love with this fic, and I can wait to read the next chapter in this amazing tale.~Beth
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  • From ANON - avid fan on October 16, 2005
    You really do have a talent for writing. As for the this latest chapter, i love it, though i can only hope that Xa'an will do something dramatic about all those laughing/snickering at him. Also can't wait to see Xa'an's full psychic potential (maybe from someone attacking his bonded?). Anyway, i avidly await your next update to this story and can't wait for "current" Xander to come around. Best of Luck!
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  • From ANON - Elaine on October 13, 2005
    You better continue it. I want to know how it ends. I just found this fic. Please don't discontinue it? Please?*pouts*
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  • From Siarra on October 10, 2005
    Let me tell you a little secret. Most of the best fics tend to have only a few reviews because people don't like to leave reviews when they don't have the words to express their feelings about the story in a way that would do it justice. Just a little something for you to think about before you go all teary-eyed and start believing nobody likes you or your stories. If they didn't, you would've already been told so.
    Out of all your fics, this is one of my personal favourites. I love how well you've done the frame of the story. It's rare to see that type of fic done this well, and I like the independent stories very much as well. You play with different styles and settings but they're all connected by your beautiful writing style and amazing characterizations. It's so easy to see how they are AND aren't Spike and Xander. It's also great to see how the relationship between the present moment Spike and Xan develops. I know, and you said it yourself, that this kind of story can only be written when suitably inspired and as far as my humble opinion is concerned, I'd love to be able to spend more of these lovely moments with this fic for a long time to come.
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