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Reviews for After the Fall

By : JLH
  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 07, 2005
    And the tension mounts. ACK! Hurry with the next chapter please! I'm not sure how long I can wait.
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  • From ANON - Su on September 06, 2005
    Wow love the idea and I cant wait till the next chapter to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 04, 2005
    Another great chapter. One little thing, you've got Eddie openning his wrist and putting it to Eddie's mouth when they're fixing Jonothan's leg. Also, how were the Initative able to catch Buffy and what about all the other Slayers that were created at the end of Buffy? She was able to whip an entire squad and she was holding back. Just something that's bugging me.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 03, 2005
    Very well done. Keep up the good work and update soon please.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on August 29, 2005
    Nice chapter. Glad to see that the boys found a friend. One question: Is Xander's ocular implant still working? If it is, won't the Initative come looking for him? Ok, that's two questions, but I'm curious.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on August 26, 2005
    Wonderful job again. One little thing. The Pentagon is a building in Washington, DC. I think you want pentacle or pentagram. At any rate, keep up the good job.
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  • From ANON - Falcon on August 26, 2005
    Hey, Great job so far! Really unusual story line and I"m glad you're updating it so frequently
    I wouldn't worry too much about the accent. Can't please everybody. Hun, I'm canadian and I can't tell you how many times I"ve seen American shows portray us as those 'durn Canuckers with them cheezy accents, ey?'
    I just shrug and carry on *S*. Mighty decent of you to apologise though...it was a sweet gesture *S*.

    Anywho...one teeny thing about chapter six. I think you mistook the Pentagon on the wall for the Pentagram *G*. You ment the five pointed star in a circle, not the five sided geometric figure right? five pointed star in a circle is a pentagram *S*.

    Keep up the good work!


    Falcon.
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  • From ANON - Dee on August 25, 2005
    Josie, I have to tell you I am disappointed at your "Alabama" setting. I have lived in Alabama all of my 51 years, and I remember the Civil Rights movement of the sixties, I remember the Selma to Montgomery march, I remember the bus boycott. I need to tell you that Alabamians do NOT talk like the ones you have protrayed. Not even the rural Alabamians. If the dialogue you write resembles anythng, it is "mountain speech." YOu might hear something along those lines amonfg the less educated people living in the Appalachians, but not down in Alabama, Georgia or Mississippi.

    It is very discouraging to find that the prejudice that stereotypes southerners as ignorant, stupid and bigoted lives on among Buffy fans, too. I had expected better.

    --Dee
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on August 25, 2005
    A great chapter. Watch the typos and I think you left out a word, but other than that great job. Update soon please and thanks for the email too.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on August 25, 2005
    Another great chapter. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - The Angel of Light (A.K.A. The Ruler of Hell) on August 24, 2005
    Humans are sic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on August 24, 2005
    You're just not into happy fluffy stories are you? That's ok, you're stories are so wonderful it doesn't really matter. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - babe on August 23, 2005
    i love this. my poor boys. next part soon please.
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  • From ANON - falcon on August 22, 2005
    Brilliant as always Josie *GRIN*. Looking forward to the next installment!

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2005
    Hey, I read this on Bloodclaim, but I havn't replied there yet. I just wanted to say this story is fantastic. I feel so bad for Xander and Spike and everybody. I really hope you'll post more soon. and yea I get to be first:)
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