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Reviews for After the Fall

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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 11, 2005
    *sniff* That was so sweet. But I have a feeling that the Initative isn't done with them yet. Please hurry with the next chapter.

    ps - If you need help with the developmental stages of human children, just let me know. Been there a couple of times myself.
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  • From ANON - kilroy on October 11, 2005
    two hours ago i ran a bath, but then i found your fic. my bath is now cold and i'll have to start again, but i don't care. this fic is awesome! i love all the characters...except the iniative scumbags and their sympathisers obviously...and really hope they get to be happy and free evetually. as for the reviewer who took offence at the portrayal of people from alabama , well, i come from the s/w of england and we are often portrayed on t.v as smock wearing, straw chewing ,tourist fleecing yokels !!do i care? not a lot. lifes too short !
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  • From ANON - Weeee :D on October 10, 2005
    Oh Dear, i've just finished reading your story and I realized I hadn't reviewed once. I just want to congradulate you for writing such a great story. It was very very lovely. Beautifully done, and I hope there's more to come. Please keep up the good work. When the 'nice ladies' went up against the soldier, it just made me ache, because I thought something bad could've happened to them. When Spike had to make that hard decision to turn Xander or not totally made me cry. Oh my god, that was sooo freaking good! It was sooo sad and sooo mushily gooooodd. Waahh. Heh. I love you for writing this! :hugs:
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 08, 2005
    EEK! Hurryhurryhurryhurryhurry with the next chapter. GAH! I don't think I can take the wait.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 08, 2005
    You know, the scary thing is, our current government is already acting like that in some areas. Spooky. At any rate, hurry up with an update, what are you planning on doing to poor Dan?
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 07, 2005
    I'm not sure how I missed the last few updates, but I'm caught up now. Great job. It seems the McPherson's(sp?) need to see a doctor about their cranial rectal inversion.
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  • From ANON - Selene on October 07, 2005
    hehe, love it!!! makes me cry when i read the whole thing over again, but it makes sense that is really weird cause there is the distinct possibility that it really could happen in this world someday soon
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 26, 2005
    Another great chapter. I was wondering what the side effects of using that much power would be. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 24, 2005
    Wow, another great chapter. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 23, 2005
    Nice chapter, once more. I'm assuming that since the triplets are demon babies that is why you've started them on spagetti and not pureed foods like fruits and veggies.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 16, 2005
    Very nice chapter. One little quibble though. A warlock is an oath breaker, not a male witch. A male witch is called a witch.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 13, 2005
    Very nice, more soon please.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 11, 2005
    Great chapter. Initative scum killing Buffy. grrrr Just a couple things. I thought the dog was female and who's Danny? I thought Jon's partner was Eddie.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 08, 2005
    WOO HOO! Sounds like Red and Buffy made it. Hope it's them that just 'dropped' in. Can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry.

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  • From ANON - krimson on September 07, 2005
    I stayed up till the wee hours reading this story, and I am really enjoying it. I am writing with one request. If you bring Riley into this, please don't make him a monster. If you don't like Riley, please just leave him out of the story entirely. I hate it when writers twist characters they dislike so out of shape that they are unrecognizable. Forgive my hubris, I have always been of the opinion that writers should write whatever they want. But I'd hate to end up not finishing this story when I am enjoying it so well. Thanks for sharing.
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