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Reviews for Welcome to the Fallout

By : Synn
  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 29, 2005
    This story is getting more complicated now. Strange dialogue from TPTB, visitors from another dimension who resemble some of those from this dimension and another really big war coming up. Any juicy pairings here? More soon please.
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  • From ANON - regent on August 29, 2005
    I like the concept of this story so far. I'm interested to see where you take it. This is the first of your stories that I've read, so I'm not sure if it's part of your style, but, may I suggest that you find a beta to work with. Or at least someone who knows something about English punctuation, because the long, long sentences, without punctuation, make the narrative parts very difficult to read. The dialog bits are marginally better in terms of readability. As I said though, good start. Hoping you continue and will make an effort to make it easier to read.

    Thanks

    regent
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 30, 2005
    This story is getting better! Are the people from the alternate universe/dimension coming through to help our crew? WTF is the Immortal? More please.
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  • From ANON - Monkey on July 20, 2005
    I LOVE IT!! More pretty pretty please!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 20, 2005
    The first chapter is a tease. Are you giving us more soon? How pissed is Buffy going to be knowing Spike is alive?
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