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Reviews for Spike and Buffy's Story

By : CynmanticalSmile
  • From ANON - lj on August 31, 2005
    ummmmmmmmmmmmm
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  • From ANON - Dante on August 15, 2005
    Please don't continue this crap
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  • From ANON - Staple_Kitten on July 18, 2005
    Holly shit that sucked. Sorry but it did. Have u ever heard of suspense and detailing? U could turned those lines into a full blasted couple of pages. Well good luck with anything else u do. *Peace*Love*Happiness*
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  • From ANON - spuffffff on July 16, 2005
    wow its very different, you kinda did a reverse, only a little harsher
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  • From ANON - storywise on June 23, 2005
    Oh no, Spike would never abuse Buffy, and Buffy would never act submissive as a way to avoid taking any responsibility. (Balcony sex, anyone?) BwaHahahahaaaaaaaaa Some people are picking on you for the wrong reasons. Stick to the ones that criticize you for your lacking in the area of grammar and plot. And for your own sake, please heed their advice. It says in your profile you like to have sex a lot, if you're old enough to do it, then you should have some idea how to write about it. Have a nice day. And don't let this get you down too much. It's not the end of the world that you're not the next Herself_NYC in Spuffydom..
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  • From ANON - anon on June 22, 2005
    crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Soul of the Rose on June 22, 2005
    I don't want to be cruel here. It's hard to be a first time writer, I sympathize. And it was brave to try it. But I will say that it HURT me to see characters that I have such deep affection for treated so cruelly. For the hardcore fans, these are 'people' we care about and know well. Have you ever even SEEN the show?? Buffy and Spike would never, ever interact that way. And I'm all for smut and fantasy but there needs to be some reason behind such drastic behavior changes for the characters. If you want to continue this fic, please consider making some changes. Best of Luck.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on June 22, 2005
    My bad, I clicked on the wrong story....disregaurd my previous comment.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on June 22, 2005
    I loved this little story! I hope that there is more to it, cuz it really seems like the first chapter of an amazing story. An even if it's just a little ficlet, it's a great ficlet. I needed that today, thank you! Please keep writting. :)
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  • From ANON - Nikki on June 21, 2005
    I've read the other reviews, and while I know its their own opinion, I think some of them were really harsh. If you wrote this just for kicks, than good for you. If you were serious, then ok, :) I think you should continue writing if you want to, regardless of what anybody says. That is all, :)
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  • From ANON - Ella on June 21, 2005
    please, please, do not continue.
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  • From ANON - Nic on June 21, 2005
    That was ao horrible why would anyone want to read a story where he treats her like that and she just sits back with her tail inbetween her hairy pu**y and takes it.. "Should i continue this?" thats a joke right?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2005
    even for a pwp this is really lacking in any kind of story structure. Please be more considerate of your writing in future, you could learn a lot from reading other authors work - and looking at how they compile stories. Your story lacks description and depth, and to be honest, isn't at all good - sorry.
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  • From ANON - Megan on June 20, 2005
    Are you serious? God, please, no more!
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  • From ANON - spikesbint on June 20, 2005
    Well that was short and to the point, i dont like to flame anyone, because its not nice, but you do need to work on your story structure and sentences and plot, take some time out to develop your story and get a good beta

    Angela
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