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Reviews for Spike and Buffy's Story

By : CynmanticalSmile
  • From ANON - spikestheman on June 20, 2005
    NO please do not continue, no plot, no story, just YUCK!!!
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  • From ANON - bluesushi on June 20, 2005
    Should you continue?!!! Sorry, but please DONT!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2005
    um...wow.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2005
    I hope this was an attempt at the infamous "bad fic" genre because if it isn't I plead with you to stop right now and get a writing mentor. The sentence structure, capitalization and grammar need improvement. The characters do not seem true to the original characterization. I do not recognize your ?characters? as being remotely canon Buffy or Spike.

    If you are serious about writing and the fic wasn?t just a ?joke? or having a fun time?. Get a reputable beta to look things over? they can help you iron out a lot of the problems.

    Good luck!

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  • From ANON - tammy on June 20, 2005
    no
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  • From ANON - NEO on June 20, 2005
    If you want to write about fucking learn how to write first, if you gave this story some plot, and made the sex better that pump, pump, grunt I'm done, it would be better. There might be some good story with the whole master slave thing, but dont continue with the way you wrote the first "chapter". You can't really call those few lines of crap a chapter, or a teaser, because, apparently it teased no one.
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  • From ANON - anon34 on June 20, 2005
    This is REALLY bad...DON't CONTINUE.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat1 on June 20, 2005
    Should you continue? In a word, no. First off, the grammer isn't all that great. Also, this story doesn't seem to be very well thought out. And while I do understand that your trying to go for pure smut, there has to be some motivation for the characters. Even if it's that they just horny. I'm sorry, but you need to really rethink this or at the very least rewrite it. Why don't you go read some of the other stories on this board that have a lot of hits, tons of reviews and a really high rating? This should give you some idea of what it takes to make a good story. I'm sorry if this seems a bit harsh considering that this is your first story, but please, seriously rethink this.
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