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Reviews for Holiday Fun

By : tasha9
  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2010
    There's some OOC-ness going on, for starters.. Buffy wouldn't use the word distress in that sense.
    Also, the spelling and sentence structure needs some work
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  • From ANON - ME on August 23, 2005
    IM HOPEING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER THAT ONE WAS JUST...YUMMY
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2005
    Hey girly i don't care what others say about the spacing or the lack of action. if they had thought about it f second it wold of been pretty clear that there was going to be more chapters... any way carry on the great work and i'll drop by now and the to see when you update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2005
    u need some more action
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  • From ANON - Erin on June 20, 2005
    Hey baby, been waitin so long for this, am proud of ya, keep it going! xxx
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  • From Rox on June 20, 2005
    Hey hun, loved the fic and i can't wait to read more ;) keep up the yummy- droolyness
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  • From ANON - greens on June 19, 2005
    I love it-great start. I look forward to reading more...my only suggestion is to try using spaces, or papragraphs-it will make it easier to read.
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