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Reviews for Follow Through

By : MistressTitania
  • From ANON - Kitsune Morgan on June 19, 2005
    I love the story. Most of the time when I read stories that are crossed over with Harry Potter they seem to be lacking the story base for one or the other. This one you do a good job of blending the two. I read the first part and what Xanders dad I wanted to hurt the damn man. When I read more I cheered and was glad to see that Drew went byebye. I hope to read more soon
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  • From ANON - belinda on June 19, 2005
    This is a very beautiful story. I love Xander and want to see him happy
    thank you for seeing that he and Harry are happy. I cried all the way to
    the end. P.S. Please hurt Dumbledore BADLY!!!!! Disgusting Turd.

    Thank you
    Belinda
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  • From ANON - blacknightwolf04 on June 19, 2005
    awesome chapter. i like that u have wes in here. he might be ooc but thats alright. i think he is fine the way he is. i hope you might focus a lil on wes in coming chapters. maybe a friendship with him and xander. but i really think Wes fits into this really well. lol i love the story and i can't wait for more, so keep writin!
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  • From ANON - wizardvamp on June 19, 2005
    Hmmmm....the plot thickens. I'm not sure I entirely agree with you making Dumbledore one of the 'bad' guys, but hey its your story and you do what you want! Hehehehehehehe...but great job so far. Btw can you please explain what an OOC is, that kind of confused me a little bit! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Carmella on June 14, 2005
    Sweet, can you please go on? I do so enjoy this stroy
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on June 10, 2005
    Yes, I want a list of reasons why you hate Dumbledore. I'm not too fond of Dumbledore after the 5th book. I want to know your reasons, so I can see if they're the same reasons as mine. By the way, what prophecy did Spike find? And is Giles and Hermione in this? If so, pls don't bash them! Same goes for Neville, Luna and Tonks! They are 3 of my top fav characters! As for why he didn't train Xanders, either he buried Ripper too deep, or Willow had something to do with it!
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  • From ANON - Bella_Morta on June 09, 2005
    Follow Through is very good so far and u should countine this piece for the enjoyment of others like my self.
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  • From ANON - Kizuna on June 09, 2005
    I realy love the idea behind this story. Cant wait to see what else you do with the magic thing.
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  • From ANON - shavin on June 09, 2005
    You know if there's one thing I've noticed often in most slash stories that involve Xander/Spike, Angel(us)/Xander, Spike/Angel(us) and Xander/Angel(us)/Spike that Buffy always seems to be a bitch and I've always wondered why that is? Hmmmm.... anyways great story thus far I'm really eager to see what the next installment is going to be like! Are we going to have a little M/M or even M/M/M next time? Just wondering!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2005
    write the next chapter soon i love this story
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  • From ANON - blacknightwolf04 on June 09, 2005
    awesome story you have to update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ~Changling~ on June 05, 2005
    this is a great story. The plot is diffrent, and the characterization is vivid. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2005
    Awww how sweet how Angelus and Spike are taking care of Xander. You know you don't often see a soft side of Angelus in slash (at least not from the start) but this is deffinitly a creative start! Good job! I can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - ladyicondraco on June 01, 2005
    Its good, I really like it, but you are writting in the wrong tense. Thoughts can be in present tense, but actions in a story are supposed to be in past tense.
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  • From ANON - Yukiko_xAkuma on June 01, 2005
    it is really good so far i like how you change spike and angelus charicters some keep going
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