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By : nik1styles
  • From ANON - Kat on June 10, 2005
    Yes! I have been waiting for a chapter like that to happen! Finally a relationship with a bump in the road. It's always good to put some strain between Buffy and Faith like that! I wonder if Faith will ever forgive Buffy for saying their relationship was nothing. There's got to be some fighting somewhere in there!
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  • From ANON - blonde101 on June 10, 2005
    woah... this is a really good story you need to update as soon as possible! keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - luana on June 09, 2005
    good fic!post more please
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  • From ANON - ALLIE on June 08, 2005
    THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER. WHY DO YOU ALWAYS LEAVE IT AT A GOOD PART. ARGHH. HURRY AND UPDATE I WANT TO SEE WANT HAPPENS WITH FAITH AND BUFFY AND THE WHOLE GANG. WILL FAITH TURN PYSCHO SLAYER AGAIN, SUICIDE, RUN AWAY AND NEVER COME BACK? PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE
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  • From ANON - Just Me on June 08, 2005
    Okay still the best and the hottest new Buffy/Faith story, but hell Buffy was a whimp caving in like that, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - fai on June 08, 2005
    Only one word for this PERFECt.......loving all the tention. I cant believe buffy just did that what a bitch..keep updating and ill keep reading :)
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  • From ANON - damnedchick on June 08, 2005
    Hey, I like your fic, its really cool, please update soon and keep up the good work!
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  • From nik1styles on June 08, 2005
    omnikool and fox_feather,

    let me tell you, reviews like that are what make it cool to write fanfiction. you're both detailed and tell me what is and isn't working. thanks.

    it's funny that the 'buffy's' missing thing came up, because i was going to address that in the next chapter. angel was so pissed at buffy, which you will def see later, because he did hear them. i'm gonna explain why he didn't in the next chapter. kennedy, the only other person with superhearing(the others were far enough away to not hear...faith could hear them, but it was only tiny noises, i.e. creeks, moans, that were keeping her awake), was also able to hear them, and that's why she didn't really contribute except to defend willow. faith's gonna find out later that kennedy knew. hopefully, this'll satisfy your discrepancies.

    fox_feather, i think that it was really possible for willow to react like that with faith. i got the impression that she hadn't so much forgiven faith in the last couple episodes, but that she was exhausted and couldn't bother giving problems. they only had the one hospital scene in Dirty Girls, and there wasn't really any making up there. i think willow has been putting up with faith, but now that a few weeks has passed and they've been allowed to recuperate, she feels comfortable enough to go off on something she feels strongly about. and we HAVE seen willow be resentful in the past over people's relationships, even if it was kind of unfair.

    yeah, cordy's gonna play a big role in the rest of the story... if you read the summary for the story, it describes something that really hasn't happened yet. in the next few chapters, there's gonna be some drama and big bad stuff going on with in the group. so... thanks for reviews.... thanks everyone. hope you enjoy.
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  • From ANON - greens on June 08, 2005
    Awesome job-loving it.
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  • From ANON - cristina on June 08, 2005
    kick ass chapter! I love the angst. Do continue, and SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol, Great job!
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  • From ANON - Fox_Feather on June 07, 2005
    Ouch. Some definite angst going on there.
    Willow needs here arse whooped since she's very much in the same bed as Faith. Can you say overreaction? Serious issues.
    Considering it was she who bought Faith to the Dale....I wont get in the way of a great story (and it is) but a reason to why she is suddenly going all "grr" when previously she was fine would be great. I tend to think that those two forgave and got over in the last epps. In earlier seasons (before the flaying) this would have been fine but now...the characters have grown quite a bit so a bit of clarification would be good.

    As for Buffy...hmmm wake up and smell the roses and stop carring about what everyone else thinks. Who in their right mind would turn down Faith?This particular insecurity is VERY unattractive. And although she has to (*strong nudge*) i'd require some serious groveling to take her back...or maybe a breakdown rofl. Although im still upset with Dawn for kicking her sis out of the house im very happy she was in Faith's corner (her sister's corner)...blood should be thicker than water...at least with these two...

    Also i do have to agree with omi about the "where's buffy" thing. There was some serious screaming going on there so it would have been a little hard not to see where she was?or who she was with?or how many times rofl.
    Im interested to see what you do with Queen C- could be some great stuff coming from there. She?s a great character just don?t forget what she recently went through.
    Overall, very hot (scorching), very good (never a doubt) and very well written (as always). And as it should be i am prepared to be your (obviously opinionated-appologies) slave as long as you keep updating (preferably very fast?I need my fix!) :).
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - omnikool on June 07, 2005
    It's me again. Just wanted to encourage to keep writing. You're doing a great job and I can't wait to see what happens next!!! I felt you deserve more than 15 reviews so I figured I'd toss a couple your way. Actually this is really just a shameless ploy to get you to write chapter 7. :) I hope it works! :)
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  • From ANON - omnikool on June 07, 2005
    Okay first of all, what is Willow's problem? The two people she brutally murdered on purpose were just appetizers before the main course : destroying the world. She really needs to chill and go screw her own slayer and let Buffy have Faith. Secondly, I feel sorry for Wood because he got totally used. Let's hope he stays mad and gone(crosses finger and toes). Third thing, what's up with the search party? How could they not know where Buffy was? Faith and Buffy very loudly screwed each other's brains out, all night, repeatedly. Angel and Kennedy both have super hearing, how could they miss that? How could normal people miss that? I mean if Faith could her Kennedy and Willow screwing, then surely Kennedy could hear Buffy and Faith. The hotel is big but it's not THAT big!

    Don't get me wrong. Everything else was great, and the sex! WOW!!! HOT HOT HOT!!! It's just the whole 'where's Buffy story line' was a little tough to swallow for reasons I stated.

    Fourth thing, I can't wait to see what you're going to do with Cordelia. That will be one helluva story in and of itself. Lastly, please give Buffy a clue. Why is she trying to please Willow! Willow, the "I killed 2 people, tried to the destroy the world and eat more pussy than the law allows" is hardly in a position to judge anybody, EVER. So give Buffy a clue, don't let Faith go off the deep end and have Willow take a chill pill. Some hot makeup sex between Buffy and Faith would be good. I'm seeing Buffy grovelling at Faith altar for several hours. Faith deserves more than a few good orgasms but grovelling + giving great head is always a good start. :)
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  • From ANON - anna on June 07, 2005
    OMG! you weren't kiddin with the angst. how could buffy do that? who in the hell does she think she is? grr...phew..anyways...hot update. oh dear..don't make faith do anythin stupid...please. lol. the whole ending--screw it the whole thing has me speechless. wow! update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 07, 2005
    buffys a bitch!!! but hurry up and update some more :D
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