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By : Buffygirl
  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2005
    u should update soon im curious about what happens next.
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  • From ANON - magpie on October 13, 2005
    Sorry, but I really have to stop reading this. While you obviously seem to be a decent writer you made a big mistake, at least in my eyes. The plot had lots of potential but your Cordelia is just too mary suish. In the first 5 or 6 chapters her character was amusing, but that turned quickly into boring and from that point on to outright annoying. You obviously seem to like her character a lot and there's nothing bad about that. But it seemed to me as if your intention for the story had been different, at least at the beginning. I think that character ruined a perfectly good plot.
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  • From ANON - karalynn on October 05, 2005
    Come back soon, this is a great story and I miss it
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  • From ANON - Neke on September 21, 2005
    All I gotta say is that this story is far more one of the best fics I've read in a while and it's such a flow read that I've read it twice and it still keeps me on my toes so yea.... please update asap cuz this is the best and your the best at it ha ha keep it up!
    k
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  • From ANON - wyttgr on September 01, 2005
    I statred this awhile back and got totally hooked! This is a great thought and story line.....please do more!
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  • From ANON - Candy on August 21, 2005
    Hey
    This is an awesome fanfic and I can't wait to see what comes next!
    I totally read the whole thing in one day flat.
    hope you update soon.
    Candy
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  • From ANON - blackie on August 02, 2005
    :)

    until the next chapter......??????
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  • From ANON - badmonki on August 01, 2005
    I have really enjoyed this fic. I just love it when one of them has a baby, except for Xander and Anya. :) at first, I was allittle annoyed with the changin POV's, but after reading all of the chapters, I think it was right for this story. If you had told it from the third person or just from Buffy or Faith's POV, I really don't think the story would have been as good. That's my opinion anyway. I was a little shocked at how you wrote Cordy to have this maternal instinct, it works, but I would rather see maybe Willow take on more of that role. Nothing personal, just really not a Cordy fan. Anyway, overall, I thin this is great and I hope you keep writing. I can't say that I know how hard it is to write fics, 'cuz I don't have the grapes to do that yet. So don't let any negative reviews get you down. Some of us do appreciate you and the work that you do!!! =)
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  • From ANON - TRU_FAITH on July 25, 2005
    Love this story, please keep it coming :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2005
    PLez update soon.I cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - KatdaKit on July 02, 2005
    Cmon!!! I adore this story. I check on it probably every day and I'm dying that you haven't updated. I re-read some things and I still get a kick out of the jokes. Let alone other more... interesting parts of the story ^_~ I love Annie and the way you potrayed Cordy is so true. The fact that there is depth in the story and not just smut is a good thing as well. It kills me how well you are writing this and I'm looking forward to the BIG 22!
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  • From ANON - jude on June 28, 2005
    hey where are the updates, checking everyday, come on your killing me!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Katie K on June 26, 2005
    COME ON!!! *pouts* UPDATE! PLEASE! I am DYING here! Well not really... but I really, really, really, really, really want you to update.
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  • From ANON - Beck on June 26, 2005
    WHERE DID YOU GO. Update already. I can't stand the suspence.
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  • From ANON - sheila on June 26, 2005
    Hey.. I miss the updates. I check your story everyday. I miss reading it, it was getting so good too. *pouts* I can make you cake or anything you want if you update.. *grins* PLEASE update soon
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