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Reviews for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

By : LitGal
  • From Mamacita on August 23, 2009
    i'm not specifically a buffy fan and was only reading this story as part of the archive clean-up team, but instead of just skimming it for the typos and glitches that several software crashes have caused in people's stories, it caught my interest and in started actually READING it! (25 chapters? this one's gonna take me a while!) and i'm having a blast. the part i enjoy most so far is xander's little mental running commentary on everything, especially spike. it's so witty, and you write very well. so--whether i'm a buffy fan or not--this story is really a joy to read! very nice job.
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  • From fairietayle on April 22, 2009
    I've never been one for these kinds of stories, but for some reason you got me captivated and fascinated me enough for me to keep on reading.
    And before I npticed it, I was living with the story; eeping with anticipation and laughing in a funny spot.
    I guess the ultimate reason for that is your way of writing. It's coherent, logical, interesting and captivating. The plot was straightforward with nice twists that kept things interesting. And I loved how much attention you paid to the psychological aspect of things. The way Xander wasn't who he used to be and how he could never be that again, and the way both Xander and Spike both grew into their new relationship.
    So, simply put: Wonderful work!
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  • From Viktoria on August 11, 2007
    absolutely stunning! I have essentailly spent like the last two days doing nothing but reading this story [it was worth every moment]!
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  • From Viktoria on August 10, 2007
    just read the first chapter and I am REALLY loving this plot- VERY unique- Love the suspence!
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  • From ANON - kaji11 on November 30, 2005
    I just discovered this story and loved it.
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  • From ANON - Lexandria on November 24, 2005
    wonderful story, I can't even begin to describe how much I liked it! There was so much detail and real emotion and feeling and understanding of what Xander must have been thinking and feeling. you give the reader the ability to empathise with Xander, to understand as the other characters didn't, and to hope that they would soon. I just.. wow... one of the best fanfics I've ever read! I'm so pleased you're doing a sequel. I can't find the words for a distinctly detailed and long review.. cuz all I can think is 'wow'

    on a side note, the thing on teh number four? I was all excited.. I suffer from OCD and LOVE the number four and.. well, that made my day, seriously.

    ~Lexandria
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  • From ANON - Rayvenfire on September 27, 2005
    I don't know if i reviewed this story the last time I read it, but just in case I review it now. I loved this story. The whole thing was a delight to read. So delightful I read it again! :) I really hope you are continueing this arc. I hope to follow it religiously ;) You're a great writer. And I love Spike and Xander fanfiction. Thanks for the pleasure you gave me posting this.

    Rayvenfire
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  • From ANON - sati on July 28, 2005
    That was great. I was glued to my seat while reading and was late for work trying to fit in one more chapter.

    I can't wait for the sequel!

    Great story, great charactarizations and i'm glad Giles learned a little bit.
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  • From ANON - alice2 on July 03, 2005
    HELLO ....... Time for more .... Come out, come out, wherever you are
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  • From ANON - j on June 25, 2005
    Can't wait for your next Broken verse.... thank you for the update

    J
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  • From ANON - WindandSummer on June 12, 2005
    Wow this was realy alsome i loved the story and cant wait for the nexted addition but i totaly understand your wish to work on some litter stuff and i gotta say that i look forward to you continuing with the mangelled story and second verse.
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  • From ANON - dragon on May 22, 2005
    ok, this is driving me nuts! I love all of your stories so far! Please, PLEASE write something! PUH-LEEZE!
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  • From ANON - Loki on May 22, 2005
    Hey. Just finished. Am in shock. That was absolutely fantabulous. Seriously. Tell you what, with any luck, by the time you've finished the sequel, I'll be a bit more eloquent. At the moment I don't think I can manage much more than total worship and admiration. Love, Loki.
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  • From LadyFlame on May 21, 2005
    I shall look forward to the sequel, and I will enjoy the updates to your other stories too :D
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  • From ANON - E on May 18, 2005
    This is just amazing. Can?t say that I?m too happy about having to wait untill fall for a chance to see this story continued but I expect it?ll be worth the wait. Though admittedly the fact that I love your Second Verse series helps a great deal:) And Mangled Spells is good too of course...
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