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Reviews for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

By : LitGal
  • From ANON - E on April 29, 2005
    Hope there?ll be more, really soon... I need it:)
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  • From ANON - StarwolfRealms on April 28, 2005
    Wow! I really like this story though its hideously brutal... I certainly am glad I don't live in that world. Well written, by the way. I'm only on chapter five, but I intend to come back to this again and keep reading. Until your done writing it. KEEP up the GOOD WORK!!!!

    (I'm not even all that familiar with Buffy, never watched it much when it was on TV. Not that I didn't want to. Just not good at watching TV shows on a regular basis. Plan on getting it Season by Season, just like my other fave TV Shows....)

    Anyway, despite not being too familiar (only seen a few full Buffy episodes), I was able to follow most of what was going on quite well. I think I did see the episode that Buffy died in, so I take it that this is around that episode's time? I vaguely remember that and the business of Spike's chip. But again, I was never an avid Buffy follower... woulda liked to have been, but my ability to remember TV shows and dates and such always lacked, even with my other fave shows. The only two shows I ever consistently was able to watch on my own, a few years back, was 'Stargate Sg-1' and (going much further back) 'Are You Afraid of the Dark?'

    My usual TV-watching is limited to Hit-and-miss, mere chance. Enough of that though...

    Update ASAP. Whenever you next can. Thanks.

    *Shudders* at the amount of discomfort and such cruelty poor Xander and the other demons' slaves and would-be slaves had to go through.... I think I'd rather die right away than go through all that.
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  • From ANON - Alice on April 27, 2005
    wow, action. I'm getting excited, but scared of what will happen when they find the girls. I hope they'll be okay. I'm so ready for more.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on April 27, 2005
    YES! AN UPDATE! Oh happy day. Wonderful chapter. Update soon please. I've become addicted to your story and I go into withdrawal if you take to long posting. Is that sad or what?

    PS - This story is now on my recommended reading list.
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  • From ANON - Fan Girly on April 26, 2005
    YAY for Xander getting away from Giles cause that was sooo not healthy. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Lit Gal on April 25, 2005
    Recommended reading lists -- That took me the longest time to figure out myself.

    Click on the story you like and look at the address. The address should end with a series of numbers. For Broken, end of the address looks like
    php?no=544181666

    The number "544181666" is what you want. Log in and go to your recommended reading. Put in the numbers and hit update. If the numbers are correct, the name of the story will appear next to the box.

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    Thanks for all the feedback on this guys. I have been incredibly jazzed over how much attention this piece has gotten and I really appreciate everyone taking time to drop me a note. I read these...a lot...more than I should.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on April 25, 2005
    I would love to put this story on my recommended reading list, but I haven't a clue on how to do that. At any rate, great chapter, please keep them coming.
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  • From ANON - Alice on April 25, 2005
    Wow, Xander driving. That should be interesting. Having to make all those snap judgements. Could help Xander, but who knows. Anywhoo, another exciting chapter and I want more.
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  • From ANON - Jasemin on April 25, 2005
    Joyce to the rescue.... I can't WAIT for their reunion !!!
    I have at least three scenarios in my head, but I'm sure you will surpise me.
    I'm serious, you have me hooked. GIVE ME MORE !!!!



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  • From ANON - Alice on April 24, 2005
    Oh god, that was sad, seeing Xander slip back again, and then seeing Giles so broken. Its so sad seeing them so angry and distenced. I have so many questions: will Xander talk to the Watcher counselor, will they agree with Spike or Giles, will Giles get better, will the Girls be okay? Ack, my brain is leaking. Please hurry and update!
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  • From ANON - E on April 24, 2005
    Oh shit, now I?m really hating Giles and Angel. Hope that they either realize how wrong they are (preferably in a rather humiliating or embarassing fashion) or that one of the others just beat the crap out of them. Possibly they could kill them:) Making Xander doubt Spike, so not liking that... Hope there?ll be more soon. This is a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on April 24, 2005
    WOO HOO! WAY TO GO JOYCE! Great chapter! It figures that a woman would have to fix things. Men can be such dopes. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Christine on April 24, 2005
    Go Joyce!! That was awesome, I'm sooo happy that Joyce went and got Xander from the mentally upset Giles. Now, I cannot wait until Xander and Spike are reunited. I hope that Spike finds out about some of the things that Angel and Giles said to Xander so that he can prove them wrong by telling Xander that he wants to keep him forever. This chapter was soo awesome, I'm soo excited for the next one. Please post the next one, like NOW!
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  • From ANON - Kiana on April 24, 2005
    YES!! He's out of the hellhouse! The last couple of chapters were making me tear up. Please post soon!
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  • From ANON - Leah on April 24, 2005
    "Sniff sniff" I think I will need more Kleenex if I continue to read this one. I love it and can't wait for more. Why Oh why will they not see that Spike is what Xander needs. More please soon.
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