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Reviews for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

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  • From ANON - Zephyr on May 03, 2005
    Wow. I was NOT expecting something like this when I clicked the link. The plot is absolutely amazing, the way you characterized Xander and Spike and the rest is just...wow. Fantastic work. I'll definitely be watching for the update of this one!! Great job!

    **Zeph**
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  • From LadyFlame on May 03, 2005
    Argh, what a cliffhanger, I'm on tenderhooks, good job I know you are likely to update this within a few days cause I really can't wait!!
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  • From ANON - Discord on May 03, 2005
    Nooooo!!! How could you!!!
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  • From ANON - nightengale1824 on May 02, 2005
    Good grief !!! Are you trying to kill me. I am so tied up in knots right now I won't be able to sleep. Great cliffhanger. Now let's see an update real soon please. I am not opposed to begging or bribing. Don't leave me hanging long.AHHHHHHHHH!! What will I do till you update? Good to see Willow and hear that Tara? is there also. Please don't kill Spike.
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  • From ANON - E on May 02, 2005
    Spike can?t be dead! Lirowaus is lying! He has to be... Now will you please, please kill him? I hate to see Xander in so much pain. Please? I?m begging here:)
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on May 02, 2005
    SHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHIT! You'd better plan on updating soon. I can't take it! AAAAAHHHHHHHH!
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  • From ANON - Alice on May 01, 2005
    This chapter was fun, seeing Xander act so differently at this slave show than at the last one. I really enjoyed this, and I'm excited about them maybe finding Tara and Willow. Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Jasemin on May 01, 2005
    Oh, oh, oh.... Xander seems to be the hit at the auction. I just hope that there's no one too interested in him. Loved that new chappy, love the whole story.
    Don't end it too soon, I'm lookin' forward to much, much more Spander action... ;-) And btw, did I mention that I'd love that you update so much ?

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  • From ANON - Discord on May 01, 2005
    Ooh, I hope they find the girls and they aren't too damaged! Spike and Xander are being *so* cute!
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  • From ANON - LadyNiteRaven on May 01, 2005
    Excelent chapter. Well written, great length. More please.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on May 01, 2005
    Xander's gotten a bit frisky, hasn't he? Great chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Alice on April 30, 2005
    I think Spike should take Xander to a sci-fi convention- that should remind Xander of interests. Kidding. This chapter was great, and I love that Spike trained him without hitting him. I kinda hope things won't go exactly right (but in fanfic, they never do) so Xander gets a chance to cuss out and kill Leshar. Bastard. Very good story, and I am hooked. Please continue. I hope things work out for Giles, too.
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  • From ANON - Discord on April 30, 2005
    *hums* Lovely story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on April 29, 2005
    YES! An update! Wonderful! Can't wait to see if Angel will try and screw up their chance to rescue the girls.
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  • From ANON - StarwolfRealms on April 29, 2005
    Read up to the current 14 chapters. Bloody good story thus far. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update ASAP! I'll check back with it again soon.

    I like the way you write this story, though there are a few spelling errors here and there. I could point them out... but its unlikely you or I want to take the time and correct every minor spelling and grammar error.


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