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Reviews for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

By : LitGal
  • From ANON - nightengale1824 on May 04, 2005
    Okay I am feeling a little better that things will get okay soon. I am so sad for Xander and Spike. Much thanks for a great ride so far.
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  • From ANON - Discord on May 04, 2005
    *Thank God!* Now Spike can escape and save Xander. Silly Xander... Spike luvs him.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on May 04, 2005
    :grabs the tissues: You had better update soon.
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  • From ANON - E on May 04, 2005
    God, I?ve got tears in my eyes. So sad. I know you tend to update quickly but it really couldn?t happen too soon for me. Can?t wait to see if Spike manage to get out.
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  • From ANON - Jasemin on May 04, 2005
    OK... do you want to kill me ?!?!
    I'm sittin' here, shocked and sad.
    Don't leave me like this... please update soo, will ya ?
    BTW... love, love, love the story.
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  • From LadyFlame on May 04, 2005
    Argh, this plot twists like a knife. Poor Xander, he finally feels safe with a worthy master, and some bastard steals it all away, and even worse he has to try and please his new master to keep his true master safe... Spike has gotta be going out of his tree!!
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  • From ANON - TheCharmer on May 04, 2005
    OH NOOOO!!!! *on her kees and begging* Please don?t do this! Keep them save - let Angel, or even Giles rescue them! Please!!!!
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  • From BurneHazard on May 04, 2005
    {Insert various screams, whimpers and mutters here}

    Chapter 17 - .....no! You can't, not forget Spike! Please tell me that Spike will rip that effin' demon's insides out? Please? Even if it means calling Angel, his sire? Can't let Xander be brain-washed by semen!

    Thank you for updating 16 & 17 so swiftly but...ARG! You can't just leave this story there. Granted, great use of characters, very powerful and diverse imagination. But, please, next chapter ASAP!? I'm going to be checking back every 5 minutes until I pass out until it's updated...not good for me! I think I have white hairs...
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  • From ANON - Alice on May 03, 2005
    *weeps* Oh my god, please hurry up and update, I can't take this. Its so heartbreaking! Please hurry!
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on May 03, 2005
    Ok, you'd better put the next chapter up very soon or you will be responsible for the mental instability of a certain black cat.
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  • From ANON - Discord on May 03, 2005
    Please tell me he's hit rock bottom and is not going to get worse! Lie if you have to.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2005
    Ok i like the story and all but god damn it can't you just let them be together, my god what else are you going to do to them. please fix it so they are back together ok!!!! i was crying cause of what happened!!! geeze give a guy and his vamp lover a break!
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  • From ANON - Amy on May 03, 2005
    Unfortunately, I suck at reviews, I really do... but "broken" is the best piece of fiction i have rea on aff.net or, for that matter, anywhere.

    For every one story I read on this site, there are ten who's reviews assure me I shouldnt bother reading them... and for every piec ei read, there are three i dont bother finishing.

    I read your story over and over... all of your works are great but "broken" is fantastic. At night, I refresh the page again and again, hoping for an update.

    It's just awesome all around :)
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  • From ANON - Alice on May 03, 2005
    What?!?! OH MY GOD! I'm ready to scream. Please update soon or my brain will explode. Please! Oh god! Please please please please please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Esfinge on May 03, 2005
    Hi, I've been following your story from the beginning, and I just love it. I haven't reviewd before now, and I'm sorry for that, but I just had to leave you a review to tell you how amazing this story is. I hope you haven't killed Spike, and honestly I don't think you have. I can't wait for the next chapter, and I love that you update so often, thank you so much for that ^_^.
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