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Reviews for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2005
    you got to write more love this story:)
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  • From ANON - Alice on April 10, 2005
    Wow, this is a shocking piece, seeing Xander so broken. I am really intrigued, and want more!
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  • From ANON - Shredded_Rose on April 10, 2005
    I'm so glad to see this was updated so quickly. Well, it might not have been quick, but it certianly was for me, considering teh fact that I only read the first three chapters earlier today. I love this story. I must come back and read more. I cannot express how good this is. I'm a lover of originality, and I've never read anything like this. Hmmm. Do you think there's gonna be a visit from another of teh scoobies? Imagine how horrified they'd be... heh heh. Anyways, great stuff.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on April 10, 2005
    Let the muse tickling commence. This a wonderful origional story. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - s hill on April 10, 2005
    You updated, yea! I'm happy. Bubbles fill my bloodstream and not the bad oxygen kind that kill. I'm sitting on the edge of my chair waiting for the next chapter. So did that last little sentence mean Xander's going to try something he's trained to do in the shower and it's going to piss Spike off? And what, or should I say who, was Spike looking for at those auctions? Another Scoobie that went missing? I don't know but I really want to so write, write, write!
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  • From ANON - Shredded_Rose on April 10, 2005
    Hey, I thought this was very interesting. I was a bit wary of clicking on it, but nice job, I wish there was more to read. Fantastic description and imagination there. I think you've really captured what it's like for someone to be broken. I can't wait for you to update again!
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  • From ANON - Christine on April 10, 2005
    Awww, I feel so bad for Xander! He seems so lost with Spike. I wish that Spike would make up some new rules that would allow Xander to speak and to have some of his personality back. I also would like to know why Spike decided to buy Xander in the first place. Please post lots more soon cause I really want to know what is going to happen!
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  • From ANON - Christine on April 09, 2005
    Dude, I totally love this story! You have to post a lot more and quicker, I really want to know what is going to happen! Please please post tons more!
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  • From ANON - Bite16 on April 08, 2005
    love it. please continue.
    bite16
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  • From ANON - E on April 08, 2005
    This is great hope there?ll be more chapters soon even though you don?t really know where it?s going... Just hope it?s not one of those fics where Xander?s all miserable and Spike doesn?t care about him. I love stories with Xander as a slave and Spike as his master but prefer it if whatever happens between them is consensual. Even if it doesn?t begin that way...
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2005
    i can not wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Discord on April 08, 2005
    *dead silence* Oh, wow...
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  • From ANON - Spyder616 on April 08, 2005

    Okay so I read this on blood claim but didn't review. This is a wonderful story and it'll be interesting to see if it will be nice Spike or evil Spike. I actually like both and I?m not too bothered by which you pick. However I admit to leaning towards evil spike although spike was never really really evil and I love that he has a sensitive side. I think I?m babbling but what I?m trying to say is that I like Spike to be evil but still have a piece of humanity that will (although he may punish Xander) be nice to him and treat him well. If however you prefer to write nice Spike then I?m not going to complain, any Spike makes me happy and it would certainly be interesting to see if Xander can become the person he used to be. That would probably be a difficult transaction for him and should Spike return him to the Scoobies Xander would probably just follow Spike around. Okay this is probably the longest review I?ve ever met so I?m going to summarise really quickly and stop boring you - great story, lots of potential and has many different ways in which it can go from here. Keep up the great work. BTW, where did Spike get the money from?

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  • From ANON - s hill on April 08, 2005
    Okay, wait a minute. You cannot, I repeat, cannot, be so cruel. Now, I'm not talking about Spike, Xander or even the whole sex slave thing. I'm talking about stopping where you did! I want more, and I mean now! I need to know what's gonna happen. Bad, cruel Spike; nice, tender Spike; or. . . something else? I don't know and it's killing me! Just so you know, I'm totally rooting for Nice Spike who tries to fix Xander and eventually does and they find they love each other and maybe one gets pregnant and all that mush. Yeah. Anyway, write more please. Please. I love you. . . .
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  • From ANON - josie on April 08, 2005
    A delicious fiction!! Well contructed and beautifully populated with wonderful characters and plausible story!

    Many thanks for sharing your talent - please...Please... continue!


    Cheers
    J
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