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Reviews for Broken (AKA Beautiful Broken)

By : LitGal
  • From ANON - Alice on April 12, 2005
    Oh my god, that chapter was heartbreaking. Please keep going, I think my brain will explode if you stop now.
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  • From ANON - Discord on April 11, 2005
    I like it. The way Xander's thoughts flow is nice. I wish you would write what Spike's thinking.
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  • From ANON - anne on April 11, 2005
    ohh please more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i really like this story!!
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  • From ANON - IceBlueRose on April 11, 2005
    You know, I'm very happy that you updated this. And now that Spike has him, I have to wonder what else Xander went through. I liked that glimpse of the first time he saw the cages, it'll be interesting to find out what else happened...and what finally broke Xander. (Though keeping that a secret is probably part of some mystery, darn you!) And seeing Spike's reactions to everything (through Xander's perspective) is interesting. Are you going to do Spike's perspective? Either way, the story's great and I can't wait to see what little bit you decide to reveal next...like the chip! Or something else...ah, whatever, I just hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - firey vixxen on April 11, 2005
    hurry up and write more.
    ps. spike was looking for magickal females, so is it willow or cordy that he's looking for?
    firey vixxen
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  • From ANON - LitGal on April 11, 2005
    I will definitely tell you why Spike is there and why Spike is going to Joyce and how Xander got caught and what made Xander break and lots, lots more. I just don't tell the story very fast, so sometimes it takes some patience as I wait 40 pages to explain a character's motive.
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  • From ANON - gat on April 11, 2005
    so will you tell us how Xander got captured or why Spike stumbled into the auction?
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  • From ANON - Christine on April 11, 2005
    Awww, Spike is getting all sentimental on Xander's behalf... how sweet! I'm very curious as to what is going to happen next with the story. With many Spander stories, there is usually some sort of romance involved but so far in this story, it's simply master and slave. Actually, I would love for a romance to evolve between these two, they are awesome together. Please post lots more soon, I want to know what happens!
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  • From ANON - cathy on April 10, 2005
    I am absolutely loving this fic. I so look forward to the next chapter, where we might find out a bit more about what has happened to the other Scoobys. Could it have been Willow that Spike was looking for? Or Cordelia? What has Happened!

    And poor Xander. How he has been reduced. I like how you have Spike angry that Xander is like this, but not too angry to take advantage of his slave. This is definitely shaping up to quite an interesting fic.

    Hoping for more soon.

    Cathy
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  • From ANON - Josie on April 10, 2005
    Dear LitGal

    This is *such* disturbing material yet *so* well written that it cannot help become the 'addictive' read.

    Xander's internal dialogue and the juxtaposition of his training vs the maintainance of sense of self is compelling.

    Spike as the reluctant hero and shocked former 'big bad', coupled with a beautifully depicted, gradually growing tenderness for Xander is just breathtaking.

    Kudos.... and *please* more.... more!!!

    Thank you *so* much for sharing your astounding talent.

    Hugs

    J
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  • From ANON - Kizuna on April 10, 2005
    You have me addicted to all of your stories now. My guess is that spike is looking for willow. cant wait for the next chapter.
    Kizuna
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  • From ANON - Amanda W on April 10, 2005
    ::worships at the holy keyboard of the amazing and talented Litgal:: Please please please please write more! I rather like Broken!Xander, and this is one of the best I've found. I really really want to know why Spike was making the rounds of all the slave stalls. I would like to see, maybe sometime in the fic!future, is Spike and Xanny meeting the Scoobies. ::raises offering of fancy chocolates and naughty pic manip of Spike in chaps and chains(yummy)::
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  • From ANON - E on April 10, 2005
    Love it, one of the best stories right now...
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  • From ANON - DarkAvalon on April 10, 2005
    mmmmm....yummy. I really loved this story. You have an entirely original way of portraying a slave mindset that I haven't seen before and frankly, I think anyway, a far more realistic one. Most authors when they 'break' someone have them completely different and insane amoung other things until they are nolonger the character they once were in anyway. The way you write Xander is great, he's broken and he has a total petslave mindset but he's still Xander! Please write more soon, I love SpikeXander lovin' and when a broken Xan is involved its all the more fun for Spike, not the world's most stable himself, to fix him to some extent....happy sigh....Love the story! More soon Please!
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  • From Sagana on April 10, 2005
    I hope the new entries mean this has been upgraded from plot bunny to full fledged story. I enjoy all of your stories and this one is no exception. Thanks for sharing your talent!
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