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Reviews for White Lie

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  • From ANON - Aisling on May 02, 2005
    hell yea! go Fred! LOL :D more soon cya xxx

    i have pins ansd needles in one finger... irrelevant i know :(
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2005
    Evil ending ! He Cant marry her you cant do that ! well finily they r together yay ^_^ lol well great story hope to read lots more !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Leonora on May 01, 2005
    Great chappie! cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - Aisling on May 01, 2005
    damn the right thing.. she's after ur money!!! skank her skinny ass!! more soon xx
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  • From ANON - shelly on May 01, 2005
    more more more!
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  • From ANON - spikestheman on April 30, 2005
    awwwww!!Poor Johnathon, hope Fred comes in to save the day so to speak!!Hey, there doesnt need to be NO wedding does there??Cause I know two people in the church that are ready to go, dont you???????????????? Anyway I hope we get that post wedding Spuffy, keep it going Brat just lovin it as always!!!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 30, 2005
    ACK!! Get him away from harmful!! Soon! Nice Spuffy WAFF btw. Like the little bit of smut you've doled out to us so far. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - scribll on April 30, 2005
    I'm sorry, I didn't mean to review as 'ANON'. I wrote the last review.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2005
    I thought the premise was rather cliched and almost passed this by, but I thought I'd taste the first chapter just to see and ended up reading the whole story (ch.29 to date). You've trancended the cliche admirably. I love the humor, very well done. Mostly I love, love, love the characterizations which feel very true to life. You don't indulge in character bashing (except maybe Harmony, so OK), with a lot of the drama and angst due to the clear, understandable, and, most of all, unforced, misperceptions of the characters. I'm thinking most of all of your characterization of Joyce, but the same thing applies to all the characters. I went back and read one of your earlier stories and while it was good, I can see that you've really grown as an author.
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  • From ANON - pixiecorn on April 30, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DONT MARRY HER.

    lol neyway that was an awesome chpt and i hope you update real real soon
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  • From ANON - Leonora on April 30, 2005
    i love this story. the previous chapter was just...wow. and i love how u worked Lorne into it, it's wicked funny. can't wait for another update :)
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  • From ANON - Aisling on April 30, 2005
    damn! i luv Lorne :D cya xx
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  • From ANON - Creepy Susie on April 30, 2005
    you definately do not choose proper moments to end a chapter
    of course, i shouldnt be complaining since you have so kindlly posted everynight/day
    I really look forward to the chapters you post up everyday. I call it, my highlights of the night (if i had a busy day) or day (if i'm just plain lazy).
    Thank you very much and I hope I can read more of this soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2005
    I love this story, and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - aliciaspiked on April 29, 2005
    God I love that Lorne! I am getting really excited about whats going to go down at the wedding. Hope we get to read about Lorne helping them get ready. Please update soon!!!
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