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Reviews for Obsidian Moonlight

By : Melody21
  • From ANON - omnikool on March 22, 2005
    Faith must REALLY love Buffy because Tracy sounds hot!!! I like how Faith is all conflicted and scared and unsure when it comes to Buffy. She so afraid to hope for more not realizing the love is always a risk. You never know for sure; sometimes you just have to go for it and hope for the best. I'm looking forward to Faith going for it! Please update soon. Although this last update was really quick. Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - kay on March 22, 2005
    love it!! is it me or did the 2nd chapt seem a lil short? I'm not tryin to rush, by all means take ur time. i really luv the story! poor faith she's always too hard on herself
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  • From ANON - allie on March 22, 2005
    yahoo another chappi and so soon at that. i liked this chapter too and i cant wait to see tracy packing.
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  • From ANON - greens on March 22, 2005
    2nd ch as good as the 1st.. I love the playful banter between the Slayers. This is fun & sexy. Awesome job..
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2005
    sooooooo good so far. Please continue and fast!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2005
    cant wait to read more. please update soon
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  • From ANON - apple_jacks013 on March 21, 2005
    Hey Ms. Ice,

    I'm really enjoying this fic. You've got a good storyline going, nice dialogue, nice characterization, and great imagery. I love visuals. I could totally get a sense of Faith and Buffy's loft. I really like the interaction between the two as well; it's subtle, yet you get an awesome sense of closeness and genuine affection. I'm totally happy to see the way you developed the friendship. The flashback sequence was quick, easy, and well placed. The passage of time is also cool because you're constantly moving forward without glossing over too much.

    I also love Buffy's realization and acceptance of her own jealousy, even if she only thinks it's in a platonic way. I hope she figures out that it's more than platonic soon, and makes sure that Faith knows it too, and drops Tracy. Faith loving Buffy and being sweet is always great to read.

    There were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes here and there, but overall this was a very nice beginning to what is sure to a be a great fic. Thanks for sharing, and I hope you update soon. Very Soon!
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  • From ANON - LaJolie on March 21, 2005
    Like where this is going! Please continue and do it fast!
    But I really hope it;s going to be Fuffy ever after....
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  • From ANON - kitty on March 21, 2005
    Very good. Quite well written....write another chapter, or i kick ur ass! (sorry, but most of my fav authors dont update frequently and its annoying) I look forward to reading more :)
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  • From ANON - kay on March 21, 2005
    haha i luv it!! at least faith is finally gettin sum hehe. and she does spoil buffy too much. cant wait for the next chapt!!
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  • From ANON - M Kennedy on March 21, 2005
    Shit dude, this fic is awesome keep it going! I love it!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2005
    I like it so far. Can't wait for More!!!!
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  • From ANON - allie on March 21, 2005
    this is a good story and i cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - greens on March 21, 2005
    I LOVED IT!!!! U totally had me wanting more..u are off to an awesome start & I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - e on March 21, 2005
    good story, cant wait to read the next part :)
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