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By : charlemagne4ever
  • From ANON - nat on September 23, 2005
    Damn!! Don't you just want to slap Buffy! Great story - can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - tamara on September 23, 2005
    I really like your story... I just wish you wouldn't keep disappearing so long between chapters. Keep updating and i really liked the last chapter.
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  • From charlemagne4ever on September 23, 2005
    Took a bit longer than expected because first Mariana was ill and then I was away for a couple of days because of my project, and then I couldn't access AFF for some reason. Well, here it is at last, hope you enjoy it.
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  • From ANON - Brunettepet on September 02, 2005
    This is an engaging premise and the setting is colorful and well detailed. I'm more relaxed about the sheik now that his secret's out. You've fleshed him out, and Buffy's new knowledge will make a relationship with her captor much less repellent. Khari, Jr. and Buffy's relationship will be a lot of fun to explore, too. I can't wait to learn the other roles the harem plays in Khari's life and work. Nice job.
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  • From charlemagne4ever on September 01, 2005
    I haven't had a lot of time to write lately because of a big project I'm working on in RL for which I have to do nothing but research and writing and I couldn't fit creative writing into my schedule. I just sent out my new chapter to my beta Mariana. Can't wait to see her suggestions. Fortunately my beta wasn't affected by the inundations that took place in her area. But since she's got a lot of work in RL, it will take a few days for her to get to the new chapter. She hinted that maybe there could be hope for Sunday.
    I'm revising the chapters I already drafted because some parts don't fit any more because of the new episodes I've inserted, but I'm optimistic my friend will have more beta work to do soon.
    Am I going to kill off Dru and Darla? My world would be really boring without them, so for now that's a definite no.
    What are Willow and Tara's roles? Are they just wives? Good, so the hints I've scattered over the past few chapters haven't been too obvious. Keep reading, they will have bigger roles soon enough, and they're not "just wives" ;-)
    Thanks for reviewing, guys! Hope to give you your update soon. If you register for my yahoo list, you won't miss any updates. Check my profile.
    Charlie


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  • From ANON - ton on August 24, 2005
    omg that chapter was soooooooo good. the enging wit spike and anya was awsome. that fact that he didn't know that stuff is great.please rite more soon please
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  • From ANON - shelly on August 19, 2005
    Please update soon!!! I've been waiting over a month for the next chapter. This story is really good and very original. I hope you keep going with it! :o) Shelly
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  • From ANON - nique on August 11, 2005
    How 'bout this is really good. I really like it. Please update soon! Are you going to kill off Dru and Darla, please say yes.
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  • From ANON - Jill on August 10, 2005
    Ey babes! i luv r series! update soon! :D
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  • From ANON - Tanja on July 25, 2005
    I love your story so much! It really stands out among other Spuffy stories. Please, update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on July 18, 2005
    Oh my god I actually thought he knew! as I was re-reading the chapters i thought 'at least give her one phone call will ya?!' so what happens now? does spike call for her and ask her how she came to be here and she desires him at last? would you make her pregnant cuasing Drusilla to get VERY mad because she wants her kid to be the Sheik?

    What are Willow and Tara's roles? are they just his wives?

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THIS is like my most FAVORITE STORY EVER!!!!!

    can't wait for update!
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  • From ANON - rachel on July 18, 2005
    glad you are back i like this story. great chapter, adding more depth to everything. please update soon
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  • From ANON - mellissa on July 17, 2005
    I'm very pleased to see that you are still doing this fic, and I love the develop that's happening between Buffy and Spike. Looking forward to more soon!
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  • From ANON - Whisper on July 16, 2005
    so glad to see this one updated!! The last chap was really good. More soon i hope?
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 16, 2005
    Nice new chapter. Buffy gets to do something useful after finding out Spike doesn't keep sex slaves. Sorry for Spike having to be in love with her, though. More soon please.
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