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By : charlemagne4ever
  • From ANON - ReneesFic on March 27, 2005
    Buffy shouldn't be the bad guy in this story. Now, I don't think Spike should be the bad guy, either, but the other girls should not be treating Buffy as if she's done something horrible. I guess they are just brain washed. The man won't even let them masterbate (unless that is a lie like the pubic hair thing.)
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  • From ANON - NEO on March 27, 2005
    This is a really great story. I have never seen a take on S/B like this before. I love it! Update frequently!

    NEO
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  • From ANON - pixiecorn on March 27, 2005
    oh my god.


    this story is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome. i hope you update real soon. this is the best
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  • From ANON - spikestheman on March 27, 2005
    Oh,please,so now we have to feel sorry for Spike? I am so dissapointed with this chapter. I really like this story and think you are a terrific writer.Why the hell should she feel guilty about being held against her will, again Buffy is the bad guy heree and I just dont get it!!! When will we see Spike actually feeling guilty about ANYTHING!!! You have turned Buffy into some sort of self loathing bimbo who is crying because now he doesnt want her, COME ON!!! I liked the start and thought her backbone may stay in place but then that would make Spike the bad guy then HUh!!!!!!!!!Obviously he is allowed to capture women and treat them like crap but because he seduces them rather than rape them thats OK!!!!! Please can we have a guilt free Buffy, bad message to send women Charlie,its OK to not like being taken against your will girls!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Caroline on March 27, 2005
    Wow, another amazing chapter. I so love this story. I've been looking forward to this update, and will now again look forward to the next. It's very well written and keeps you wanting for more!
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  • From ANON - Jasemin on March 27, 2005
    Oh Charlie, that was another fabulous chapter... and it is a great story so far.
    There are not many stories out there that get me so emotionally hooked. I totally feel her conflict.
    I'm really curious how you plan to continue this. Don't let us wait too long for I myself can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - mellissa on March 27, 2005
    I'm very much enjoying your fic so far. Hope to see a new chapter up soon!
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  • From ANON - starhawk on March 27, 2005
    wonderful chapter, i love the story, please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Aisling on March 27, 2005
    oh god! poor Buffy ;(

    at least the others stood up for her, but for the wrong reasons! LOL let Spike change his mind soon kk? LOL i want Spuffy Smut :P ;) but i can wait.. u no what ur doing :D more soon huni cya xxx
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  • From ANON - Kyra on March 27, 2005
    This story is just so amazing. I love the culture and customs you created. I also love the complexity of the characters and situation. I can't wait to see where you plan on taking this.
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  • From ANON - Caroline on March 22, 2005
    how do you mean cliffhanger?? Please update soon! I want to read how it continues! I love this story!!
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  • From ANON - white rabbit on March 22, 2005
    wow...i so need more of this story...i'll have to go buy the book you've based it on...keep the up dates coming...can't wait too long for my next fix
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  • From ANON - Katie on March 21, 2005
    Good chapter, the little boy is so cute! This story is really good, please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Novella on March 21, 2005
    I have to say that you write truly capturing stories and have a really exciting way to develop the story line and the characters. I really liked 'Roses for Lucifer' and also this story has a great beginning, that makes you grave for more. Although I have to say that I too think that Buffy reacts a bit too easy according to her situation. I'm missing a little more resistance from her part at least for the first time.
    For the sake of the story let's say, she only chose to cooperate because she wanted something, which however does not really explain how she gets off on it, or even feels like jealousy.
    But that doesn't change the fact, that I will be anxiously waiting for you to show mercy and update fast, cause after all you are a very talented writer.

    Yours, Novella
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  • From charlemagne4ever on March 21, 2005
    Thanks everyone for reviewing! Your feedback is greatly appreciated and helps me a lot at improving my writing.
    @marie: I understand that some people would feel about the story that way. This is why I put a big fat author's note at the beginning of the story. Quote: "The country in which the story is set is fictitious - it does not exist and does not relate to any real places, real religions or real political situations. I have never been to an Arabic country, and the background I'm using for my story is that of the tales of the Arabian Nights - it is a fairytale place, no less and no more than that." Once again: my story is NOT RELATED to any REAL COUNTRIES IN THE MIDDLE EAST, I don't claim any realism. This is a FAIRY TALE for adults, which is based on another work of FICTION. I'm sorry if the story upsets you, but I must say you've been warned ;-)
    @spikestheman: I have two WIP at the moment and I'm trying to update one of them every week. As you've probably noticed, English isn't my first language, so I don't post any chapters without having my beta readers check them. They are doing a great job without ever getting anything but my thanks, and they all have their RL jobs and families, too. Sometimes it just takes a little longer to update. So far, I have the story drafted up to Chapter 7, so there's a lot to look forward to.
    To everyone who is enjoying this story, thanks for all the praise, and keep reviewing, I'm very interested in what you think!
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