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Reviews for Friends With Benefits

By : Electra126
  • From ANON - Doug on November 04, 2006
    Do hope we see some more soon, please. A lot of us are perhaps in need of another fix.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2006
    awww... that's so sad! You have to keep them together!
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  • From ANON - Doug on September 24, 2006
    Well, I just reread 5, and with 6 and what Willow is thinking seeing them well... close...
    Yeah, somebody is going to get hurt. Just who might get jealous of whom is a flip of a coin. The green-eyed monster looms darkly in both of them. And with the power they command...
    And something to consider, dear author. Just a side thought. Depending on how you have this story evole and end, I could see two other stories develope, showing the girls on their own journeys. Before they make their way back to each other. Because I'm really curious how you'll handle Faith when she goes back to Boston.
    Thanks again for the care you give your work.


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  • From ANON - Doug on September 15, 2006
    Me again... with a profound thankyou for Pt 4, and for the whole story. It flows. Its' articulate, structured, and Fun to read.
    I was thinking of my prior posting and adding a "But..." then and there, that maybe with how you ended Pt 3 one could let the story stand as is. You had already posted 4 so to the back of my mind it went. And with how the girls have barely `Rounded First` (thanks Moondancer! its still begging for more) I am beside myself with what you're going to do to them next. Please, just keep what you're doing well doing. You know, the pacing and all that. The youth of love or something like that. Just thanks.
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  • From ANON - Doug on September 15, 2006
    Spelling is one thing, detail another. Pt 2 had the girls out trying to find a club and settled for what they did because it was Wednesday. Pt 3 when they went looking for the "muchachas" the next night, the `Pussycat Club` was closed. ?Oh no, Luis? mistake,? the driver apologized. ?Wednesday night closed.?
    Sorry, but I'm quite the nazi for detail.
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  • From ANON - Doug on September 13, 2006
    For those who might be reading the reviews to see if this story is worth your time, READ THE STORY because I'm about to maybe spoil something for you...

    Well just read the first two up, and there is a point down in number 2 I had a breathing problem with.

    I had the TV on in the background this morning, so between that, the general lack of state of my mind, and my cat wanting my attention to Please do something about the rain outside, I've had a okay day-off so far, then...

    ?This whole place is filled with things that are ?girly and fruity.?? That set off some serious warning signals and as my eye also caught what Faith muttered, as it kinda just jumped out at ya, I Howled!!! So I take a breath, concentrated on what she saw, and laughed my Ass Off for a good handful of minutes!!!!! I still couldn't really see the screen well so I finished listening to `Seven Days`. About a half-hour later I was only able to get where Buffy was merely trying to be helpful and clear for Faith as to just how well she had done for their evening out. Helpful. Right. I finished Buffy's second line and I had to walk away. Again!

    Damn. You Rock, dear writer. You rock. On to number 3!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2006
    Startin to really love this story must update
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  • From ANON - j on September 11, 2006
    I really like where this is going please update soon.
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  • From ANON - me on September 02, 2005
    ok u update soon or i will be forced to hunt u down!
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  • From ANON - Randee on March 12, 2005
    Great start!!

    It's wonderful to see Faith there to comfort Buffy in her time of need. I can't wait to see Buffy and Faith's relationship continue to grow. :o)

    Pleast continue soon!!
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  • From ANON - phoenixJay27 on March 02, 2005
    hey awsome start you've got here
    i like it alot
    very sensual and heartwarming.
    do continue
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2005
    good start, love the concept. kepp going, its great!
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  • From ANON - anna on February 25, 2005
    good start...it's good that faith's there for buffy in her time of need. let's just hope buffy doesn't freak or anything and doesn't push faith away like nothin happened. more soon please.
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  • From ANON - Dylan on February 25, 2005
    Great start. Eager to be pulled in more by this *wink* Love funny Faith...and you write her so well.
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  • From ANON - Me on February 25, 2005
    Why oh why did you have to mention Spike? That put me right off of Buffy. I also don't get why Faith is being so sweet to someone who treated her like the worst kind of trash since the way they met. The fact that Faith continues to see Buffy as she was three years ago is kind of sad. I wish she would get over her Buffy fixation and leave. At that way she'd at least have some dignity.
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