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Reviews for Second Verse

By : LitGal
  • From fairietayle on April 22, 2009
    A wonderful story!
    I agree, Xander would still be Xander, no matter where he lived, babble and wardrobe included ;)
    The beginning was funny and I liked how the met. Actually, I liked the whole set up, from the Cassidy-bite to the bemon submitting to Xander/host.
    It's just so bloody well written that I can't help but love the whole story!
    And I love that you've made a sequal ^_^ So I'm just gonna go and read it now ;)
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  • From ANON - Sir Magus on July 28, 2006
    its sad it really is i read the sequel b4 i read this one-but oh well now i understand all the stuff i didnt understand b4 so it works out ok i guess. i luv ur story i really enjoyed this one and the other one too
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  • From ANON - dmalfoy on November 11, 2005
    Really enjoyed the story!
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  • From ANON - Purple Mist on October 05, 2005
    I started out liking this story, really different and it was great finding such a cool sounding plot. I loved the first couple of chapters, Xander and Spike meeting up for the first time was really HOT, but then Spike's additude towards Xander really turned me off. I read just enough to know Spike didn't rape Xander, neither did Cassidy, which really had me sigh with relief, but I just don't think Spike deserves Xander, soul and demon alike, so of couse i had to stop reading the chapter before it leds to sex and I wake up my sister by screaming at the computer of how Spike's being an asshole. Of course Xander can't go with Angel to have him help deal with his demon 'cause I think Angel would just end up making Xander feel bad for having a demon, though I know Cordy wouldn't care, she's lovely in your story. But I do think your idea for this story is good, but Spike's additude really puts me off. Ta.
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  • From ANON - RemityGirl on June 27, 2005
    Great Story!!! And I'm sooo happy that you decided to continue the 'verse. THANK YOU!!
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  • From ANON - E on March 21, 2005
    Truly amazing...
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  • From SEM on February 20, 2005
    Oh, that was good. Nice claimant sex, and independantly dependant Xan! *purrs* I thought you did really well with the way you set up this world. It's an idea that could have gone so bad, but you kept us connected to Sunnydale and acknowledged that this is an alternate earth without pounding it in our heads. I do have to wonder if this is the end, though? What happens when Gunn and the crew find out? With Alanna alive, does Gunn ever join Angel? With Xander keeping Spike in line, could they join Angel?

    Oh, and the Sunnydale tidbits almost call for a sidestory. Buffy in a coma? Did Kendra get called? And without Drucilla to kill her is she still the Slayer? Hintage that Willow became witchy with the soul-restoration ... is she following that? What about the First coming along and blowing the hell out Sunnyhell? Gah! You left us hanging on so many points. Will there be anything more?

    JJ
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  • From AngelofShadows on February 20, 2005
    This is a good story but is it realy complete? What will happen when Gunn and the other vampire hunters find out about Xander and Spike? Is Xander going to keep his job? Does he want too and if so, then will Spike be jealous? There is so much you can still do with the story. I hope you make a sequel to it. :)
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  • From ANON - cloudie on February 18, 2005
    Not so much a review as some appreciative feedback for an excellent fic. This was just fantastic Spander. Girl, if this is your first fic in the Spander arena I can't wait to see more. Loved the alternate storyline and your different take on the pet/claiming rituals - really well thought out idea that worked nicely. I hope someone has pointed you in the direction of Bloodclaim, a Spander community - you should post this fic there. Happily you have already been pimped there so expect lots more fb for your sexy, lovable, wildly entertaining fic:-)

    cloudie
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  • From ANON - dragonclaw21974 on February 18, 2005
    This was a really great fic, and it has been getting really good praise on alot of the Livejournal communities. I hope to see more from you soon.
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  • From ANON - sparrow2000 on February 17, 2005
    Read this last night, reread it tonight and it's still as good. Great story, lovely twist on the whole Xanpet(tm siegelit) scenario and hot hot action at Safari. Not to mention cool evil Spike - so much more interesting than the broody souled version. Great work and complete as well, what more could a reader want. Cough, well actually I'd really like to know what happens next - Xander's made his choice, how will that go down with Gunn, what about his job in the club and can he really accept being Spike's pet. Sounds like an episode of Soap, but enquiring minds want to know. Thanks again for a great story.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on February 17, 2005
    WOW!!! That just about sums up this story and it was definitely a great story, believable characters, an actual plot and great by-play between Spike and Xander all I can say is that it would be a definite shame if you didn't either write more of this or just plain write more. I await future stories with eagerness.
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