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By : addielogan
  • From ANON - Sarah on March 21, 2005
    I have to say I'm really enjoying this story. I think your characterizations are right on and I love the different dialogues you have going. I especially enjoyed the whole part about Illyria and the Rubiks cube.
    So many stories these days don't bother with any kind of plot development because they are too busy trying to get to the hot make up scene. I think your story is great because of the build up and the fact you don't have all the problems from the past magically disappear. We get to see their fears and insecurities and that makes them more real and your story is that much better for it.
    Please don't listen to anyone who thinks you are just dragging this out. They don't understand what makes a good story and would probably be better off sticking with PWP instead of insulting good authors with their 'help'.
    Please keep up the great writing. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Screaming Flamingos on March 21, 2005
    Grrr! Let's get them together soon, shall we???? I do like the story, and I think that it is very well written, but I can't help feeling like you're stringing us along, dragging this out as long as possible. I don't think that's your plan - at least I hope not! :-) But in all fairness, you're gonna have to give me something more spuffy-like in order to keep me interested in your story. At this point, there doesn't seem to be an end in sight. I feel that Buffy and Spike are just dancing around the issue, and I can't wait for one of them to get fed up with all the avoidance and just start talking!

    I hate to leave a negative review, but I just want to help make the story better. I do like this story, and you have something great here. So sorry for all the negativity!
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  • From ANON - nique on March 21, 2005
    Thank God I'm not the only one that wondered why Spike could love Buffy without a soul and Angel couldn't. The fact that Spike did proved to me that he really loved her.
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  • From ANON - vsnj on March 20, 2005
    Please continue ASAP! I'm really enjoying this and can't wait for a new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Birdman45 on March 20, 2005
    Please keep Buffy and Spike together please don't separate them pleeeeeeaaaaasssseee dpn't separate them.
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  • From ANON - timoefochange on March 20, 2005
    Update good. Very, very good.
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  • From ANON - Ella on March 20, 2005
    i'm still reading!!!
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  • From ANON - jane on March 20, 2005
    Gosh I think Buffy did more thinking in this chapter than she did in the entire series. I'm on the edge of my seat with anticipation.
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  • From ANON - Amy on March 20, 2005
    I swear those two....... *sigh* A good ol' fashioned shag-fest is definately needed to make things all good and stuff between them again!! Yup, definately thing so! I love this story and can't wait for you to update again!!
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  • From ANON - slayerspet on March 16, 2005
    That was good...I cant wait for another update.
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  • From ANON - ScreamingFlamingos on March 08, 2005
    Well, I love it! Although I was surprised at Willow's reaction about Spike and Buffy - but I guess I shouldn't be - Buffy's "friends" weren't all that observant of her. Loved Illyria and the Rubik's cube part! I was giggling when Willow said she hadn't gotten to putting it in her mouth. I would love to see more Illyria in your story for I just love her! If you can, that is, add more of her into the story - but not just for comic relief - Illyria made some good observations and opinions.

    It is a slow-paced story, and I'm ansy to get to the part where Buffy and Spike FINALLY have the "us" talk, but I understand why it is slow, and I can wait to get to the 'good stuff' ;-) Just don't make us wait too long! :-) See, what we need is for a giant hand to come out of now-where and whack both Buffy and Spike upside the head to knock some sense into them!!!! :-)

    I can't wait for more. You are doing a fantastic job so far!
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  • From ANON - Scarlet Ibis on March 08, 2005
    "My biggest problem now has been keeping Angel's little blue friend busy." I had major gutter brain on that sentence... And I get Buffy and Spike's responses, and even Angel's [forgot he was human for a day], but now I don't get Willow's. But I suppose her's over view on the Spike/Buffy relationship from before could be a toss up...
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  • From ANON - Kate on March 08, 2005
    This story is progressing so well! This lastest chapter (7) really resonated with me emotionally, especially on Buffy's behalf. Her frustration at her own feelings, Willow's words and Angel's words and actions came through loud and clear and had me feeling as frustrated as Buffy. I was glad she set things straight with Willow and yelled at Angel because A) it's nice to see her finally standing up for herself with regards to her personal life and b) if she hadn't yelled, I would've had to have gone and thrown something in my apartment. lol This chapter worked so well to get across Buffy's situation at the moment and all the emotions and thoughts she is expriencing. Dying to know how all of this is going to play out.
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  • From ANON - jane on March 08, 2005
    Well I stand corrected and accept I've probably been a bit harsh on Buffy. I wonder If the other Scoobies feel like Willow. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
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  • From ANON - CC on March 05, 2005
    Cool!
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