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Reviews for Irreversible Error

By : EdenGardenOf
  • From ANON - NeverEnoughFuffy on January 10, 2005
    Was good, I enjoyed it, although I thought it was perhaps a little over-written in places. Though to an extent I guess that would be down to personal taste. One or two typos, but even with a good beta that's often unavoidable (always watch out for the old lose/loose).

    Is the point about Faith being given a boat by the mayor after the tribute to a sea god canon? I am only aware of it from Book Two of Dreamsmith AJK's 'Super Happy Ending Bedtime Story'.

    Keep up the good work,

    NEF

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  • From ANON - Black Haired Demon on January 10, 2005
    come on this can't be the end you can't leave it like this, what are you doing to me here...... aaaaarrrrgggh *blinks couple of times* sorry I lost it there for a sec ^_^"

    Anyway I hope that there's going to be of it!
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  • From ANON - AbstractRainbow on January 09, 2005
    Dude! You're like the... God of Bittersweet!
    Totally awesome fick, if all heartwrenching and stuff. I loved it. I love all your work. You're an awesome author!
    In truth, I was shocked to find you reading my shit of a piece.

    Unfortunately, i need inform you through Review, since the e-mail in your account profile is dead.
    I do read my fics over before posting, them, however seeing as how i already know what's going on in the story, and what's going to happen, if i put something in that won't make sense until i post something else, i don't realize that sicne i already know. As well, i know how my mind works, so things that may not make sense to others, will likely make sense to me.
    To top it all off, I don't even HAVE a beta reader, so i've no one to tell me when i'm being an idiot.

    As far as the Seelie and Unseelie go, i only know minor bits about them, gleaned from references and random factoids that i've managed to dig up. If you'd be willing to tell me a few things that would be useful, i'd be very grateful. As well, i would truly appreciate being told what exactly it is that is confusing about things in the chapters, so that i can fix them. Some things are supposed to be confusing, but not as many as are probably there.

    Anyway, GREAT STORY! Please respond,
    And thank you very much,

    Ev~ AbstractRainbow

    MoonfireKitten@hotmail.com jaydn_crescent@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Mira on January 09, 2005
    That was really wonderful. I think you ought to continue, mostly for my own greed. It's good enough to stand on its own and be significant and profound that way, but it'd be awesome to have a continuation, and elaborate on the story.
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  • From ANON - Queen Zulu on January 08, 2005
    Beautiful writing. I think it works well as a one-off, because the only plot-thread you have really is that Faith may betray the mayor. I don't know if that's enough for a big epic WiP. It certainly could be...but, as a shorter piece, this story already works well. You have some great description here, and a good grasp of Faith's character--the inner perversity of it. Awesome.
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  • From ANON - kitty on January 08, 2005
    nice. i was a little confused (that was my fault, cos i was listening to music and only giving it half my attention) but it was quite good. please write a second chapter
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  • From ANON - bkitty on January 08, 2005
    That was very angsty wasn't it, but then I guess you did say it would be. I liked it though.
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  • From ANON - Ganglion on January 08, 2005
    It's fantastic.
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