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Reviews for Baby, It's Cold Outside

By : addielogan
  • From ANON - astrodex on December 08, 2004
    Great pacing, you have their voices down perfectly, more, more, more...please.
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  • From ANON - Roz on December 08, 2004
    I like the story so far. I just noticed what I think was a typo in chapter 3:

    "He knew, being what he was, that he should've have saved her. He should've just kicked back, lit up a cigarette, and watched the bloodshed. But he hadn't."

    I'm guessing that the first "should've" should actually be "shouldn't".

    Other than that, I like the story. I especially like the Angel cookie part. LOL Please keep updating.




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  • From ANON - Rana on December 07, 2004
    Loving this story Addie! I like how the UST between Buffy and Spike keeps the snark and barbs from becoming all out nastiness. I also like how they are slowly, but surely getting closer to each other. Hmmm, awful convenient that Joyce got called away... Can't wait to see what develops next!
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  • From ANON - Jenn on December 07, 2004
    Yay! you updated, I realylike how you wrote them getting along, but they still have petty fights. It's amusing and funny, I'm happy you updated so soon and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2004
    I should have guessed Joyce's trip would last longer. Those kinds of things always seem to come up.
    I like the way you characterize the characters too. More please.
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  • From ANON - Holly on December 07, 2004
    I'm glad you're writing this story. Real life has been sucky lately and I really needed the fluffy pick me up. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on December 07, 2004
    I don't normally like Christmas fics, but this one is great. I love how Spike is all sweet with Joyce and then all evil when shes not around. I really am enjoying this alot. Please update soon, I can't wait until the next chapter is up!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on December 07, 2004
    Great so far! I cant wait to read more! Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Asakella on December 07, 2004
    Great chappies. I'm reviewing, so please update!

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  • From ANON - Dariclone on December 07, 2004
    I haven't read much Spuffy lately but I figured reading a nice fluffy Christmas story with the same title as one of my favourite carols sounded like a good idea.
    Boy was I right! This fic's genius.
    I love the interaction between Spike and Joyce and Buffy getting all mad about it. I loved that you made reference to Joyce's hot chocolate and those mini marshmellows too. The part with the Angel cookie was so funny!
    Please keep more coming!
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  • From ANON - TheCharmer on December 07, 2004
    Oh, I can see that one coming.... let me guess, a snowstorm and the two are trapped for days.... lol!
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  • From ANON - Tammy on December 07, 2004
    I'm sorry, but those two are annoying me in this story and Buffy is pissing me off. I feel like slapping her for acting like a child and Joyce is a little out of character. I kinda thought they wouldn't be fighting all that much. You made it seem like it would be all fluffy in the beginning, but they obviously don't seem to like each other, so I'm not sure how that would change. All I ask is that Buffy stop with the attitude and try to accept what's going on and get over it. And Spike can get his own blood. He's not completely helpless. Alright, all I had to say. Sorry if it seemed a bit rude. I usually always say what's on my mind. Still interested to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2004
    more please.
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  • From ANON - pattyanne on December 07, 2004
    Oh, I love it! More, please and soon.
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  • From ANON - Gabriella on December 07, 2004
    Oh lord, I am s? cracked up! Those two together..! *snicker*
    I cant wait to see what it ends with, and what about letting Joyce have to stay a little longer in Sunnydale, a snowstorm perhabs?

    I love this story, and it very read-able. Very good :D

    Just keep up the good work.
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