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Reviews for Public Display of Affection

By : theBrizzle
  • From ANON - QueenBoadicea on May 15, 2003
    Great story although the sentences are properly placed and it gets cut off. Don't worry; I had the same problem when I first started doing this. You just have to know where to make the breaks. Maybe you could make the beach scene the first chapter and move the rest to the second...or third...or fourth.
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily on May 15, 2003
    Loved Holding Out, Loved this one two!
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