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Reviews for Lonely Far Too Long

By : Ellixer
  • From phanphic on May 28, 2003
    Wow! The way you write the "love" scene is really incredible. A lot of really good points. You said the story was revised... I don't know what you did, but I didn't really like the beginning part. I felt like it needed a little bit more, like when they were on the phone... I couldn't really get what was going on, and the switching POV's kind of confused me too.

    But other than that it's a great fic... great PWP and right on with staying true to character. I'd like to read more of this, maybe dive into a little more of Buffy's intentions and see why/how they ended up the way they did.
    Keep up the good work
    -Jane
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  • From ANON - Goddessalien on May 14, 2003
    Nice little fic.

    Very descriptive. Perhaps a little more pacing next time? I enjoyed it.
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