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Reviews for Touch the Sun

By : Electra126
  • From ANON - Dee on November 08, 2004
    NOOOOOOOO, not another cliffhanger! I'm amazed at how you've incorporated Buffy & Faiths' changed relationship into the events that took place in Season 3, it really seems natural, in as so much that there is not really such a person called The Slayer. But that's why they call it a story... Please continue soon ...

    You and Dyand and Queen Zulu are EVIL!
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  • From ANON - mint on November 08, 2004
    Good stuff yet again. The story?s moving along well and the Angel ?issue? got handled without making him too much of a bad guy. In my mind the whole prom thing could have been more significant, but that?s just me. Nicely done how Faith first mentions that all her belongings could fit into a bag, and then Buffy sees bag filled with Faith?s clothes.

    Really looking forward for more. Please, show us too? ;)
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  • From ANON - callistosbitch on November 08, 2004
    Damn! Why must you end it there???
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  • From ANON - Dylan on November 08, 2004
    Faith's not the only one doing a happy dance.....bring on some hot lovin.
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  • From ANON - Cat (a.k.a. ProphecyGirl-vv on fanfiction.net) on November 08, 2004
    Sweet! Wow that was a good chap. I loved the way Angel said that stuff to Faith. I feel like that is something he would have done in 'real life'(ok so you know what I mean) and something he should have done in S3 if Faith hadn't been all bad slayer. And woo hoo! Yay for the Buffy Faith smoochies! The only thing I am thinking is that with Angel having just left, wont it seem like Faith is taking advge oge of Buffy because she is vulnerable? Like maybe the scoobs will think that or even Faith or even Buffy and she would get mad at Faith ahhh! Angst! Ok sorry im babbling. Really looking forward to the next update though. Oh and what are you going to do on fanfiction.net with the nc-17 stuff? Are you going to do the same story but just toned down or like continue differently? Ok im done now. Good work!
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  • From ANON - allie on November 08, 2004
    cant wait for the next chapter to this fantastic story you have here. i loved this chapter and i especially liked when you let speak her mind on how she felt and stuff to buffy. i loved it and i cant wiat for more
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  • From ANON - Hayley on November 07, 2004
    That was great, what a build-up! Bring on the smut!
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  • From ANON - Kecky on October 31, 2004
    This is such a great fic. It's already wormed its way onto my list of favorites. That happened somewhere betw1 an1 and 3. Every time you post i got back and reread at least the chapter before. Not cuz i dont remember just cuz it was so good. Your Challenge fic is great too. Love em both.

    -Kecky
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2004
    omg i loved that chapter. i love this story and i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope buffy and faith will get together in the next chappie
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  • From ANON - Hayley on October 27, 2004
    Excellent! It's such a great build-up to the smut that'll follow, right? Please?
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  • From ANON - mint on October 27, 2004
    Nice idea to go though rewritten season three in fast forward, only to pause with more important events.
    Great chapters and all the events are handled well. I also like the way it's like Faith's telling the story.
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  • From ANON - Queen Zulu on October 27, 2004
    Hey there. Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner; now that I've read the story, I don't know why I didn't read it before. You've got a nice concise way of dealing with canon events while still focusing on the romantic elements that I like. Some good rewriting bits, too. I'm definitely hooked; I'm looking forward to reading what comes next. Are you gonna post this on Passionate Oasis, too?
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  • From on October 27, 2004
    awww so sweet...i hope that buffy isnt playin faith and really does love her and not just lookin for a rebound from angel cause thatd be so sad...and i hate sad stuff :-( ... cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - callistosbitch on October 27, 2004
    Aww this storys so fucking cute! B better all be with the lovin of Faith, cause she cant lead her on like that if shes not. Update soon
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  • From ANON - Cat on October 27, 2004
    Yay! So cute! More more more! Please?
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