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Reviews for Play Ball!

By : patty
  • From ANON - Nicky on November 10, 2004
    I know I reviewed you on SR already, but I came to see what was going on at AFF and found (to my surprise) that you have no reviews.

    See, that?s totally unacceptable so I just thought I?d review.

    I think, people are just waiting until you?re finished until they read it, because you have this habit of leaving us on the edge of our seats with nasty cliff hangers.

    So?more, sometime soon would be nice.

    (And keep Devlin off the booze, I think he?s plastered. That's the only excuse I can come up with to explain why he wrote: [.:Devlin:. Does thing fasten in the back or in the front...?] on your tag-board.)

    Nicky x

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  • From ANON - kit larsen on November 10, 2004
    It seems like a good start for a AU fic and I don't think the baseball thing has been done before...just to point a few things - You had Spike in room 205 in the first 2 chapters and then in 215 in the third...was there a room change? And you made Alexander Harris his agent in chapter two, but in chapter three you list Xander Harris as being the catcher on tanFranFran Demons... sorry, I tend to pick up that sort of stuff. But the writing is great and I like the story!
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  • From ANON - Kimber on November 10, 2004
    Ahhhh

    Nice to see you back.....like where you are taking this....really sweet in fact....hope to see more of your other stories soon.

    Kimber
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  • From ANON - Pattyanne on November 10, 2004
    I haven't forgotten thne, ne, or abandoned it, I just kind of ran out
    of steam for a bit but it WILL be finished, I promise. Next up though is
    the next chapter of Blue Eyed Devil, so that should buy me a little time,
    right?
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  • From ANON - spikestheman on November 10, 2004
    Thank-god I had wondered where you were Pattyanne...just love this story and cant wait for the next installment!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Whatever happened to The story about the stand up comedian, you left us high and dry on that one!!!
    Well keep up the good work and I would love to read another update REAL soon, thanks again..
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  • From ANON - lolita on October 16, 2004
    Oh my goodness girl - what a place to leave it! You do realise that you are totally evil don't you? *sigh* Well I want to see more soon, I hope that you understand? :)
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  • From ANON - lolita on October 16, 2004
    Yay another new story from my fav author! I am loving this story too this first chapter was just so funny - bless little Spike, poor confused male, it cracked me up! Nice to see some more original stuff from ya, although pretty soon people will be stealing your ideanamenamely me! LOL. Only kidding *shifty look*. ;)
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  • From ANON - mistress on October 11, 2004
    OMG! what could that problem be?! i'm dying to find out what happens next... keep updating please..
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  • From ANON - imandrra on October 11, 2004
    love the "angel n"! i"!
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  • From ANON - Cress on October 10, 2004
    Brilliant! Spike and the whole "angel nurse" thing made my heart flip flop. I know you said this was going to be a short one, but now I have to whine... WHYYYYYY? Can't it be long? Please? Well if not, please update soon. ;)
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  • From ANON - jill on October 09, 2004
    Pattyanne...how cruel you are to leave us hanging like that...LOVE the story and cant wait to see if his LARGE problem is stuck in the urinal!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Update us PLEASE!!!!!
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