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Reviews for Surprise Innocence Twisted

By : Azrielle6969
  • From ANON - txjmfan on September 17, 2004
    Love it so far. ROTFLMAO when Dawn kicked Xander....hehehehe. TOO CUTE! Can't wait te whe what happens next.
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  • From ANON - feistypumpkin on September 16, 2004
    Awww! Baby Dawn and Spike together are so adorable. Kudos about having Dawn kick Xander in the leg.
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  • From ANON - FangfaceAndrea on September 15, 2004
    this is just so cute, i ove this Spike and Dawn is just so cute, all thigs consider i think Buffy's hadling Spike's retur rather well. i can't wait to see what's gonna happen with the whole Glory deal and Spike proving he can be good. can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 15, 2004
    more please.
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  • From ANON - Rana on September 15, 2004
    love how you are infusing your story with actual season 5 events. i'm intrigued by the idea of Spike being the one given the Dagonsphere. very interesting twist. still in love with this story. update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Lucy on September 15, 2004
    I'm really liking this story! At first the flashbacks were a bit confusing but it's much clearer now. I love that Dawn is Spike's and Buffy's daughter and I'd really like to find out how that happened, you know with the monks, the green light and the impregnation. To answer your question the Buffy Spike interaction was VERY believable, and I like how you integrated conversations that happened on the show into your story. Can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 15, 2004
    The Buffy/Spike interaction seemed pretty realistic to me. It's understandable that she doesn't trust him yet. Anyways, good update, and personally I don't find your story confusing at all :)
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  • From ANON - jane on September 15, 2004
    Really good story Joyce is great as always.
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  • From ANON - kiss_me on September 14, 2004
    wow... awww poor Buffy! dont let Spike hurt or try and take Dawn away! please? Spuffyness soon plz also? luving it... gr8 story cya x
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  • From ANON - jane on September 14, 2004
    YAY UDATE UPDATE UPDATE GOTTA HAVE MORE
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  • From ANON - Burnz on September 13, 2004
    An interesting fic so far. One point I didn't understand though was--"After going through the whole place she was sure Spike had taken Dru and left town. She didn?t know why but that hurt her. Deeply. ?After what we had how could he just leave?? " This was a bit strange since she had jumped up and ran away chasing Angel confessing her love for him then followed it up with going to the factory to evict both Dru and Spike.
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  • From ANON - feistypumpkin on September 13, 2004
    Nice story you've got going here. Can't wait for the update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2004
    more please.
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  • From ANON - Rana on September 13, 2004
    more, more, more! i am dangerously addicted to this story. i can just imagine Spike holding a pudgy little, big blue-eyed Dawnie. *sigh* exactly how old is Dawn? it would help in imagining how she looks if we knew her age. thank you for revealing the truth of Dawn's paternity to Spike so early in the story. i can't wait to see cuteness between them!
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  • From ANON - cynthia on September 13, 2004

    I had to think hard for a little while to figure out if Dawn was Buffy's daughter, but I finally got it this chapter!

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! It's so fuckin' adorable

    Please keep the chapters coming

    Can't wait to read more
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