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Reviews for The tale to the noir

By : rogiari
  • From ANON - becky on August 26, 2004
    good updates!
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  • From ANON - Angela on August 26, 2004
    It?s not a bad story, but you wasted my time by not putting a header B/A before it. I hate that pairing. Is it going to stay that way?
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  • From ANON - Faith C. on July 25, 2004
    Good plot idea but unfortunatly very badly written. Most of the words are used wrong and the phrases are mixed up and confusing in an attempt at eloquent writeing. Try again and reread what you've written outloud to see if it makes sense.
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  • From ANON - becky on July 21, 2004
    this was a good chapter but sad! she and Spike should work it out not fight to the death:(
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  • From ANON - becky on July 19, 2004
    hot! i cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - novella on July 16, 2004
    I'm sorry to have to say this but this story was translated with very poor English. I myself am not a native English speaker but I find it difficult to follow the storyline with all the wrong tenses and terms. I've given up at chapter 2.

    It's really a pity because the idea is great and I believe quite exciting in its original language (French I suppose).

    You might want to search for somebody who can translate it properly and your story should just do fine!

    Maybe you can even post a link to the original for those who know French, I would be interested in reading it again.
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