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Reviews for The Brink Of Your Mind

By : EdenGardenOf
  • From ANON - EvilDoer on June 24, 2004
    Oh you ARE good. I think the dream is an interesting twist. And i can totally see how you're filtering out the flashbacks and puttign in more of the pre. Th. This is really incredeble stuff here, Hope to see much much more of it too!
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  • From ANON - Shane on June 24, 2004
    So good to see this updated! and another amazing chapter. I l the the shared dream (hated when it ended) I always thought that was a part of the show that the writers could have explored more, but who needs them when you're here to do it! Can't wait to see the next part.
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  • From ANON - lemons on June 24, 2004
    Freakin unbelievable! ELR you are a master I swear. You actually put me in that forest with Faith, i swear the way you put together words and imagery is just stunning! And you made me want to punch Giles in the face for ending that dream! haha! Can't wait to see where this is goign... no really... hurry up! or take you're time whatever I jsut knwo it'll be fantastic
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  • From ANON - poet on June 24, 2004
    Oh no you dont!! ya cant stop there my friend, With that chapter I am well and finely hooked on this fic. Gotta have more soon please?! I love your descriptions very beautiful
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  • From EdenGardenOf on June 19, 2004
    ah, see the thing is, i did this as a one off piece, right? so it was, mainly, all flashbacks. with the second part (even though there wasn't supposed to be one, damn you lot and your persuasive powers!), i didn't put in as many flashbacks, and added more story, and this part there was just the one flashbacks. so basicall'm 'm filtering out the flashbacks to bring it to cronological (prolly spelt wrong, i dun care), so i can continue without having to base it on a flashback of some sort. cause if i'd just gone right from flashbacky ficness, to cronological ficness, it would have totally broken up the flow of the whole fecking thing. and i hate when that happens.

    so m'dear, there's a good reason for the flashbacks, but worry not! they won't be presant in the next part. there is a method to my madness, i assure you. i'm not *just* a nutjob you know..

    and i know i used the word 'flashback' far, *far* too many times in that first paragraph. but watch me care. it's 10 to 4 in the am..
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  • From ANON - Queen Zulu on June 19, 2004
    Hey, thought I'd drop by and give you a little update!love. I'm really enjoying the idea of Buffy knowing about Faith's past before she arrives, and how that might change their history together. If I could give you a suggestion, it would be that you don't need flashbacks. Usually, the story flows just fine in chronological order...or so I've found. I liked the part where Willow suggests that she's Faith's friend, and Buffy doesn't believe her. I wonder if Buffy considers herself to be Faith's friend. That could be interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - AcidBurn on June 18, 2004
    Can't wait to read the next chapter, keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Dylan on June 18, 2004
    I'm liking the original spin on this story. It's certainly gonna keep me coming back for more.
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  • From ANON - lemons on June 18, 2004
    YES! to be continued! YESS!! this fic is so amazing seriously you are really on to some thing here. I cant wait for some Buffy Faith interaction to see how you would change some of those scenes. This is really fuckin amazing. you have to write more!
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  • From ANON - EvilDoer on June 15, 2004
    oooo you are a dark one you are. Love it! Keep it going!
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  • From ANON - lemons on June 15, 2004
    OH my GAWD! that was so good. Continue? Hell yeah! you've got serious skills and i got to have more! this story has such potential! wrtie more soon?
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  • From on June 15, 2004
    This story saddens me.....but also inspires me ^^ I am hungry. That is all....
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  • From ANON - ELR on June 15, 2004
    Shane | trying to be a professional. i write alot of short pieces, alot of short series, but i've yet to be able to focus enough to complete a book. i have ADHD you see. but i'm working on it, i have the idea, i have the first couple of chapters, i hahe che characters and the plot. now i just need to work on it lol. and thank you for your kind words. i appreciate them.
    Everyone Else | Thank you for your continued support. i appreciate it so much, because i am a writer driven by my audience, just as much as i am for myself.

    and remember guys: the more you review me, the better chance you have of mworkwork popping up more often lol.

    Thanks Everyone!
    ELR
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  • From Zulu on June 14, 2004
    Mmm, darkness. Go on.
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  • From ANON - Shane on June 14, 2004
    Ok I have been well and finely knocked on my ass! all of your fic... no no that word isnt right... you're work, your beautiful written work is just outstanding! you better be a professional er somethign because you put everyone else in this littel world to same girl. please continue this... hell all your stories! I am tottaly hooked
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