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Reviews for War For Freedom

By : CortneyS
  • From ANON - king for a day on February 03, 2006
    SELENCE DOESN'T GRIN
    enough said
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  • From ANON - Jayn on November 23, 2005
    From what I seen, you have some GREAT ideas, but you're not motivated to finish them. PLEASE update soon! I really want to read more!
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  • From ANON - IciaJ on October 16, 2005
    Love it! More please! ^_^
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  • From ANON - rayne on April 26, 2005
    sounds like an interesting story to develop!
    keep it coming!

    ~r.
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  • From ANON - Catlin on September 09, 2004
    Hey I think that is an GREAT START!!! it was really good and i like where it was going i would love if u could continue it!!!
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  • From ANON - BlackCat9 on July 19, 2004
    Alright here is the "constructive criticsism" of the review. I know you said that some of the character swould be slighty out of character but there are a couple of things that bothered me. One the whole Spike calling Angel sire adn vice-versa. Even though they seem to be on friendly terms (another slgiht annoyance) it just not something I don't think either of them would call each other. In fact I think Spike is the only one who really call anyone by a nickname regularly (key word: I think, you may want to check). Seond annoyance. Willow, Giles and Xander are out on Patro with Buffy??? I can kind fo expect Angel adn SPike and deal, but those three I'm not buying (Unless you have reasons to be explained later as to why all of them were out together, then ignore this)
    Other than that I thought it was pretty good. slightly rushed, but nice. The vampire and lycans getting mixed together stratled me. (I thought only Micheal could do that becasue he has the gene or whatever)
    Annoes aes aside it was good.
    ~BlackCat9~
    P.s I feel horrible about the tons of criticism and only a few words of good. (You know how it goes, easier to point out the bad than the good)... So just know I really did actually liked this and will be checking up for chapter updates

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  • From ANON - TheatreChick on July 06, 2004
    Love it so far. Very interesting concept. I wouldn't have thought about melding Underworld and BtVS. Please post more chapters soon. With smut if you don'td.
    Td.
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  • From ANON - some1 on May 31, 2004
    More!
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  • From ANON - Nabiki on June 18, 2004
    Hi, Jc, REbel, When are writing the next chapters.
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  • From on June 02, 2004
    *purs* Dassy like!! *^^* And I'd love to see more! You need to update your fics... and not just this one! Your a talented writer, and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Calia on May 29, 2004
    This is really cool. I look forward to seeing how you explain Angelus and Xander being together. Thanks and more soon I hope.

    Callia
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  • From ANON - Asvaldson on May 26, 2004
    hmm what do I think? I think that I can't wait for another chapter to come out really really soon! lol I've been wanting to read a slash story xover with underworld, my newest favorite movie! lol.. if anyone knows of any xover stories with BtVS and Underworld with Xander slash, I would appreciate it please!
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  • From ANON - blu sanada on May 26, 2004
    I enjoyed reading this, especially since it is crossover with Underworld. I love that movie. Can't wait until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - falcon on May 25, 2004
    Well, you got my interest on this one, being that i'm a HUGE fan of Underworld and all *L*. Keep going! I want to see where this one is headed. Just one piece of advice...when it comes to stating who's speaking (Michael's POV and Third person), please don't use the huge bad-ass ubercaps again *S*. In netspeak it's akin to screaming, and it throws off the rhythm. When the page loaded, it's all I could stare at *L*. If you need to state it, just putting it in italics in regular sized fonts or in parentheses will do nicely.

    Good Luck! *G*

    falcon
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